|Reviews for Today Is Upon Us|
| t-t-t-ouch chapter 1 . 10/28/2010
I love this, how at first there's this terrible feeling of uncertainty, then acceptance, and finally freedom.
| nobody's dream girl chapter 1 . 5/27/2010
I felt so much the same way. This is so relateable for me
| Isca chapter 1 . 4/29/2010
"Hands in pockets. Exhale." Such restraint. Such angst. I like it.
"You lace your fingers through mine. And I stop mid-sentence, blink." Aww, this is so beautiful! I like that these little moments are "precious" to the speaker.
| sealednectar chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
Brilliant! A great poem. Well done.
| S.M. Tsalickis chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
Aw. I really liked this.
It reminds me of my girlfriend.
| Irish Lover chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
i love it. very nice job. keep writing ;)
| thin skin chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
This is lovely. :)
I enjoy it very much.
| HiddenFromYou chapter 1 . 4/13/2010
To be honest, I saw two sides to this poem. One, the one I could relate to a lot, was about not being able to show your love for someone in public, simply because it's not the accepted norm. The other, however, is the one that detracts me from your poem (I mean something like that anyway). It's perfectly normal for two women to hold hands walking down the street, and no one would look twice, simply because they're female. I think the message you were trying to convey (which did get across, don't worry) would have been stronger if you had used men in the poem. Men, as opposed to women, don't hold hands with their other males friends, as it isn't part of the social norm.
I hope that made sense, and wasn't just one of my early morning ramblings. XD
PS. I really liked the ending. I felt like it gave me a strength boost. :)