Reviews for Remember Me
3M2R chapter 1 . 5/30/2010
Sweet write. It is fast paced and catchy. It sounds like a romance poem... though I suppose you wrote that more on family. I like this poem. It fits more than one genre. Not many good poems can reach this standard. I'm saying because this poem is good, of course. Thumbs up.

A million breaths, a million ends (though I was thinking you could vary your vocabulary here... instead of million you could use billion for one of them to reiterate. Though million itself isn't bad)

Fav:

"A beautiful heart without a key"

"and if you can manage not to forget

please try to remember me"
IMADAW chapter 1 . 4/14/2010
OMG...The funniest thing just happened...I was reading this poem...and it started rapping in my head...like a song...and there were beats to go along with it...It sounded like a pretty cool song too...lol...anyways this was really awesome...poems aren't exactly my strong points...but I think you did a fantastic job...especially if I can rap to it...like I don't even listen to rap..lol...peace out..oil