Reviews for Phoenix Tales |
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Topaz-Raven chapter 4 . 1/30/2012 Very beautiful imagery and atmosphere. The words you use really evoke mystical images of a haunting and mesmerizing quality. My fave poems were the Water Phoenix and the Dragons one. The description in the last one with the line 'with its eternal water runes' is like word candy. I like this phrase. Overall, very lyrical and the poems all have a great flowing movement to them. |
InkyPink chapter 3 . 11/23/2010 Wonderful poem. "They rise, towards the sunlight, and ever they shine" - I really like this. I love dragons and phoenixes. Looking forward to the rest of these, if you plan to write more! |
InkyPink chapter 2 . 11/23/2010 And this one dark and smoky...you have a real talent for creating atmosphere. These have such an old-age, back-to-the-beginning feel, if you know what I mean. |
InkyPink chapter 1 . 11/23/2010 Wow. This poem is so clean and cool and pure, it almost feels like drinking water... "Far, far away I'll fly, Where nothing comes between us, save My reflection in you, clear and pure, and blue." Beautiful lines. |
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