Reviews for Saying Goodbye
name redacted chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
Great poem. Love the ideas behind it, about always loving a friend no matter what they do, and just kind of moving on. Just a note:

1."While you cried you sad cry from above" doesn't seem to make grammatical sense. It could just be me, or this could be intentional, but idk. You may want to check it out.

2. Just speculation, but the use of "Fellow" at the end of the fifth line seems a bit forced to maintain the rhyme scheme.

Otherwise, I really liked it. Good work. :)