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| lili999 chapter 1 . 6/5/2010
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| Postscript624 chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
I enjoyed the general thesis of this poem, but I'm unsure why you felt that you needed to break up your sentences into lines. While it gives it a sense of beat, when I read it with the breaks inserted the beat seems "off" from the flow of the work, maybe that's just me.
I've started to carry a thing strip of paper with me wherever I go, just in case I have to demonstrate the general concept of a mobius strip to someone. It really helps.