Reviews for Sweet Insanity
Isca chapter 3 . 5/4/2010
"Silhouettes eclipse my mind." Stunning image.
Isca chapter 2 . 4/23/2010
Oh, the subtle dazed/ways rhyming is absolutely superb!
Isca chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
"Fuck me in the dark." Well, I'll be damned. What a brilliant opening line for a haiku! I don't think you can get anymore raw than that. :)
nickyO chapter 4 . 4/22/2010
Don't really need that kind of know flowers are nice too...candy...a card...a long, long distance telephone call or a post card from half way around the world ;)
Little girl Big world chapter 3 . 4/18/2010
Oh the darkness in this poem is wonderful.

I like the use of the word silhouettes, its on my list of favorite words :)
Little girl Big world chapter 2 . 4/18/2010
The second line was my favorite.

This is amazing. I love haiku's
Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
Oh I like this "devour me" powerful line.
fleur de l'est chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
Probably the most compendious description of 'lust' I've read.. The energy and desire behind the words are palpable.
cassandove chapter 3 . 4/17/2010
Or are you a ghost?
NewRevolution chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
Wow, love the title, and love the haiku even more. Added to faves :)
nickyO chapter 2 . 4/15/2010
Gritty and dark.
for shame chapter 1 . 4/15/2010



this is a side of you

i rarely ever see.

it's like monster energy drink's slogan.

unleash the beast. heh. at least, that's

what i think it is. it's been a while since

i had monster. anyway. your pm is on the way.
ranDUMM chapter 1 . 4/15/2010

Wow, nice haiku! I liked how it was not formal and yet the passion shone clearly through. This was great, nice work!