|Reviews for Sweet Insanity|
| Isca chapter 3 . 5/4/2010
"Silhouettes eclipse my mind." Stunning image.
| Isca chapter 2 . 4/23/2010
Oh, the subtle dazed/ways rhyming is absolutely superb!
| Isca chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
"Fuck me in the dark." Well, I'll be damned. What a brilliant opening line for a haiku! I don't think you can get anymore raw than that. :)
| nickyO chapter 4 . 4/22/2010
Don't really need that kind of love...you know flowers are nice too...candy...a card...a long, long distance telephone call or a post card from half way around the world ;)
| Little girl Big world chapter 3 . 4/18/2010
Oh the darkness in this poem is wonderful.
I like the use of the word silhouettes, its on my list of favorite words :)
| Little girl Big world chapter 2 . 4/18/2010
The second line was my favorite.
This is amazing. I love haiku's
| Little girl Big world chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
Oh I like this "devour me" powerful line.
| wo bu ai ni le chapter 1 . 4/18/2010
Probably the most compendious description of 'lust' I've read.. The energy and desire behind the words are palpable.
| cassandove chapter 3 . 4/17/2010
Or are you a ghost?
| NewRevolution chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
Wow, love the title, and love the haiku even more. Added to faves :)
| nickyO chapter 2 . 4/15/2010
Gritty and dark.
| for shame chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
this is a side of you
i rarely ever see.
it's like monster energy drink's slogan.
unleash the beast. heh. at least, that's
what i think it is. it's been a while since
i had monster. anyway. your pm is on the way.
| ranDUMM chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
Wow, nice haiku! I liked how it was not formal and yet the passion shone clearly through. This was great, nice work!