I love the story and can't wait for the ending.

Why do you have this story down as complete if you leave it at a cliff hanger. I relally like this story and cant wait to see how it will end. Update soon. Please. :)

For the past couple days all I've read was this story, and I enjoyed each and every chapter. Eve's story was a long and meticulously thought out one, and the ending was more then I could have asked for. Josh, Deb, and character's like Crush, and Vivian all brought life into this story. And James.. what an adorable little boy. Thanks for sharing this with us!

Wow... I have to say... This is an amazing story and I loved it to bits! Have you ever considered getting this published? Because you should... I can't get over how amazing this is! asheepiage.

i bet killing josh was part of richard's plan.

why isnt he dead yet?grrr!

its hard to read how josh turned into a bitter, cruel man.

he's always sounds selfish but too ruin others lives, its just so sad.

eve was a victim in most times, but imo, her first mistake(out of many others) was agreeing to marry cant really blame her, josh was sweet back than and she did love him.

i applaud her for partly forgiving josh but i cant really find in myself to sympathy with a character like josh.

really enjoy reading this!

uh-oh, the last line sounded ominous.

this chapter make josh-eve sounds like an even more possible future.

nooo...

i am rooting for team jake right now. i feel that he's more sincere between the 2 brothers and the attraction between jake and eve was stronger.

but my gut feeling was telling me eve will end up with josh(im hoping my never right gut feeling is,not right).

josh just sounds like a brat to me and and hopefully eve wont stray.i know sex does not commitment but eve's not a like

It's been a really long time since I've been hooked on a story and you managed to do it :) I think you did a great job, even though it moved a little slow at times. I thought it was creative and I loved the way you did the transitions for the years going by. The only thing I wasn't crazy about was the last line because... well, two people died and they caused a scandal that could ruin their entire family, and the line just seemed to forget about everything else. Besides that, I really liked your story and I think you did a truly amazing job :)

I really like it and I can't wait to read more :D

What a great story! I absolutely loved every single bit of it! I am glad that Jake FINALLY got to be happy :-)

I can't wait to read more of your work so KEEP IT UP!

Congrats on a job well done :-)

You said you wanted help with editing so here are some spelling mistakes I noticed:

"Sever" instead of severe in the line, "severe any ties to her old life,"...

ch. 1 "'I don't know why you have [to] leave, Eve.'" missing a "to"

"filling" instead of "filing" unless darkness moonlights as a secretary ;) "darkness was filing the sky and she knew..."

"suit" instead of "suite" "where men were required to wear a suite jacket"

"barely" instead of "barley" "The noice barley made it out of her mouth."

ch. 2

"quiet" instead of "quite" in "It was a quite ride."

"than" instead of "that" in "Sweeney's appeared larger on the outside that she had imagined."

This story was absolutely amazing! You are a wonderful writer and I hope the story continues...

Aww, I loved it :)

So glad she's alive :)