Oh I KNEW he was a rotten bastard! HE'S A DAMN ROTTEN BASTARD!

Alright then, she's using Josh as a vengful rebound. That's bad. I can see that being very bad. Mostly because it's totally obvious she's in love with Jake...and of course Jake is trying to be a good man and save his family. But HELL this is just... Damn Josh couldn't just leave well enough alone.

I don't like this...I don't like it at all. Why couldn't Josh have just left WELL ENOUGH ALONE!

Just one word.

Yum

Yeah, Josh has no respect...that makes me sad :( I mean he's a good guy. Nice and everything but...ugh. Ya know?

I LOVE THIS! :D I've decided that Eve needs to keep her head straight about Jake and just steer well away from Josh, that guy acts like a horny highschool boy. Anyway. :D I'm very excited to keep reading! You TRULY have a gift! :D:D

:D I like Eve! This Richard character makes me very uneasy. I don't like him. I guess we'll see where this goes. I have a feeling I won't like him later either.

this is an awesome story i just started reading it today and i couldn't stop until i knew how it ended... I love the characters and the plot lines and I think for your first story on her it was one of the best stories i have ever read...

It was such a sweet story. I loved how complicated the plot was as well.

I started reading this not really expecting much and there were a few times when I felt like it was almost too much drama; but having finished it, I think it all needed to be included. This actually turned out very well and I liked it a lot even though it's not really the type of romance I normally read. I was sad about Josh, although in a way, I think it made it easier for everyone in the end.

There were very few grammatical errors that I came across and that always makes me happy. It was pretty well written and the characters developed nicely throughout the story.

I hope you'll keep writing and I look forward to seeing what else you may come up with. Although, do note that I try to read stories once their done so I don't have to wait for updates, so when you do start another one, it'll be a while before I read it.

I liked this story, very good

This is a good story, i really enjoyed it! well done! :)

So far I like it. It is a very information packed fist chapter :) and plus it sets the mood for one crazy adventure. I’m definitely going to have to read more.