Reviews for Candy Kisses
Creeping Collarbones chapter 1 . 4/21/2010
You have a lot of talent. I love the playful vibe of this. all the fire is here, in my arms, in yours,

tangled between us,- I loved that line.

Good job(:
irish-ileana chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
Firstly, I'd like to say that I am practically addicted to atomic fireballs. They're amazing.

I like the playfulness of the beginning and how it works with the more passionate parts of the ending, and I love the idea of this piece. I'm not sure how I feel about the "fiery faeries" part as it teeters close to the cliché line, but if you truly believe it should be part of the work, then it should be. That said, I love the second stanza, and I love "gracing the sky with their luminescent light."
emilies23 chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
Ah, this is just so passionate. Gorgeous imagery of fire.
Minor Masterpiece chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
1.) I loved the imagery of the fire, very good job portreying love & passion by using "fire" as a symbol.

2.) The second stanza is my favorite, I love the line "merely a centimeter of seperation."

3.) The way you break up your lines is absolutely wonderful, (:

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Whaaoouusses chapter 1 . 4/15/2010
do we require fire, because they require the cold?

favorite line by far! And yet once again, i cannot work thanks to you. Gee you're making this a habit eh?