Oh my goodness.

This was perfect.

I mean, you know, besides the slight typos that popped up like, 3 times. But other then that...

Ha. That's TOTALLY how I would get around a boy I liked. And that's TOTALLY how my friends would obsess over guys. You're so good at this!

And then the new guy... Ha, I can already tell that he likes her.

I REALLY love this. :) :) :)

Also, I'm excited to find out how the story idea you got from that summary of yours turns out!

There actually were a few typos, but nothing to hindering. Good connection with the blanket. I like it. :) This sounds like it will be a really good story. Onto the next chapter!

You don't accept anonymous reviews? Sorry, I wasn't logged in so I was going to review anonymously, but it's off D:

Yeah, it was good :) I read it! A couple of typos here and there, but it was good overall :) Good job!

Haha. That was a brilliant meeting. It made me laugh :). Bubble tea is yum.

I really liked this chapter. Meghan is hilarious. Luke seems really nice and sweet. I can definitely see the love complication looming. Luke vs Darwin. It seems like it's going to be very interesting :). Darwin seems funny; kind of a more arrogant, bad boy maybe? Or am I totally off here? Lol. Luke seems like the good guy; sweet, kind and funny. And Rachel seems like she's going to have her life thrown into a complete spin. Lol.

Anyway, I liked the chapter and can't wait for an update :). Great writing.

Wow. I am actually really interested to see where this goes. You've got me hooked :). I love the way you linked the picture of the little girl right back into the plot. This line did it really well:

"But in reality, the resolution is my comfort blanket- if I didn't have then I believed I wouldn't be myself. I believed that I would be a completely different person- that I would be, figuratively, naked without it."

It was short, sweet, well-written and to the point. I could literally picture the scene playing out as you described it. Well done :). It was really cool.

The voice of the character/narrator really came through strongly too. She sounds intelligent, strong and independant and it seems like her bark has a little bite. I like that :). But then the whole image of the little girl suggests there is this innocent, vulnerable, slightly naive, lost side of her that relies whole-heartedly on her "comfort blanket" and that the "dog" is going to throw her a complete curve ball. It seems like there is a long road ahead, if you know what I mean. I hope you know what I mean... Lol. Am I even on the right track here? Lol. I don't know.

Anyway, it was really really well written and very enticing. I'm keen to know what happens next!

Keep going :)

It sounds interesante.

Well this has potential. This is just the prologue so keep writing. There were some mistakes but don't worry. For some reason, I find the image of a dog jogging funny:) Heh.