|Reviews for Wild|
| I Found Myself At 24 chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
I think you did a beautiful job with this. Fantastic descrpition - very secret garden-like, but with a bit if your own spark.
Only bit I'm not sure if it works is the following:
"When it had been a courtyard, it wasn't particularly pleasant to look at, had no distinguishing characteristics, nothing special."
It just doesn't seem to flow with the rest of the piece. Maybe try and reword it so it does? Not sure how to explain what I mean. :S
| deadbeatkid chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
Your descriptions are as thick and tangled as the wild greenery you're describing, so it fits. Some lines in particular - "the earth re-taking what once belonged to it," for example - are fantastic. Dreamy bit of imagery here.