I hats cliff hangers this story is almost done please finish it. Was penelope the one at the door or was it someone else. Is she going to meet her father and how will Damien tell her and how will she react. Is she going to become a vampire. This is kind of like twilight. Update soon. Please. :)

I hats cliff hangers this story is almost done please finish it. Update soon. Please. :)

Update please! :) I really like this story. Cant wait to read the next chapter.

PLZ DNT KILL OFF ALICE THIS TIME! I LOVE THIS STORY TO THE CORE!PLZ DNT MAKE ME BEG! :-)

Trance like state? More like drunken stuper like state. So vamps that shoot vodka? Alright, I'll let that one sink in. But there was one thing, Penelope made a statement that Alice knew he was a vampire, when I thought in his discussion with Pen, he did not tell her that Alice knew. I may just be confused.

I thought this story had ended? Y did u start it back up?

Am I reviewing too much? I'm blushing from your thanking me. Well, this was quite a different chapter from the first time around. I acutally did not like how A & D spoke about Alice, it was to paternal. But it felt gothic in the way they approached each other. Finally, I loved how Damien voiced his love of Alice. *Swoons* And when he admitted that he never loved anyone before...double swoon. And to tell the truth, how Damien walked off left me thinking more M rated about what he thirsted for, not just the need to consume blood.

I really really like this story!

I'm about to fall asleep, so I can't leave a proper review,

but update soon!

:)

L.

This chapter was great. I liked how they are so sure about how they feel about each other, but then he says, Perhaps we need each other. That was uncertain and wonderful! :S

aww, it was cute when they hugged at the end. she should just move in with him. ;) great chapter.

there is one consistent grammar mistake which i think you know about so its probably just accidental. when you close a sentence with a speech mark, you often forget to put in a full stop before the closing speech mark. just thought i'd raise it. ;) otherwise, can't wait for more.

Alex is to nice and I am distrustful of him, but I might just be cynical.

Oh this is so much fuller. And this is one of my fav chaps., when he cries. Then there was my fav line...and sobs quaking through his marble body.

You did it again. And if you mention me again I'll blush.

This was lovely. I especially liked the line...Alice tried to stop the pink that she knew was seeping into her pale skin and Damien laughed, leaning closer to her. His voice was barely above a whisper, "You should know Alice, that I'm always impressed by you"

Thanks for saying my name in the thank yous. It makes me feel so special.

interesting story. i love the interations between damien and alice. can't wait for more. ;)

Your rewrite has really opened the story up to a new dimension. The combination of thoughts and dialog fill in so much more. I'm really enjoying it, again. :D