Reviews for Today Is The Beginning Of Forever
AnonymousReads chapter 26 . 12/1/2012
I hats cliff hangers this story is almost done please finish it. Was penelope the one at the door or was it someone else. Is she going to meet her father and how will Damien tell her and how will she react. Is she going to become a vampire. This is kind of like twilight. Update soon. Please. :)
AnonymousReads chapter 27 . 12/1/2012
I hats cliff hangers this story is almost done please finish it. Update soon. Please. :)
ChemicalKiss chapter 26 . 1/23/2011
Update please! :) I really like this story. Cant wait to read the next chapter.
MrsDavis chapter 25 . 1/18/2011
chewychester chapter 24 . 1/16/2011
Trance like state? More like drunken stuper like state. So vamps that shoot vodka? Alright, I'll let that one sink in. But there was one thing, Penelope made a statement that Alice knew he was a vampire, when I thought in his discussion with Pen, he did not tell her that Alice knew. I may just be confused.
Cookie Hunter chapter 1 . 1/14/2011
I thought this story had ended? Y did u start it back up?
chewychester chapter 21 . 1/13/2011
Am I reviewing too much? I'm blushing from your thanking me. Well, this was quite a different chapter from the first time around. I acutally did not like how A & D spoke about Alice, it was to paternal. But it felt gothic in the way they approached each other. Finally, I loved how Damien voiced his love of Alice. *Swoons* And when he admitted that he never loved anyone before...double swoon. And to tell the truth, how Damien walked off left me thinking more M rated about what he thirsted for, not just the need to consume blood.
Lisaflowers chapter 20 . 1/12/2011
I really really like this story!

I'm about to fall asleep, so I can't leave a proper review,

but update soon!


chewychester chapter 20 . 1/12/2011
This chapter was great. I liked how they are so sure about how they feel about each other, but then he says, Perhaps we need each other. That was uncertain and wonderful! :S
renegade01 chapter 19 . 1/11/2011
aww, it was cute when they hugged at the end. she should just move in with him. ;) great chapter.

there is one consistent grammar mistake which i think you know about so its probably just accidental. when you close a sentence with a speech mark, you often forget to put in a full stop before the closing speech mark. just thought i'd raise it. ;) otherwise, can't wait for more.
M chapter 6 . 1/11/2011
Alex is to nice and I am distrustful of him, but I might just be cynical.
chewychester chapter 19 . 1/10/2011
Oh this is so much fuller. And this is one of my fav chaps., when he cries. Then there was my fav line...and sobs quaking through his marble body.

You did it again. And if you mention me again I'll blush.
chewychester chapter 18 . 1/9/2011
This was lovely. I especially liked the line...Alice tried to stop the pink that she knew was seeping into her pale skin and Damien laughed, leaning closer to her. His voice was barely above a whisper, "You should know Alice, that I'm always impressed by you"

Thanks for saying my name in the thank yous. It makes me feel so special.
renegade01 chapter 17 . 1/9/2011
interesting story. i love the interations between damien and alice. can't wait for more. ;)
chewychester chapter 17 . 1/8/2011
Your rewrite has really opened the story up to a new dimension. The combination of thoughts and dialog fill in so much more. I'm really enjoying it, again. :D
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