Reviews for Today Is The Beginning Of Forever
WriteforFun chapter 7 . 5/31/2010
Aw poor Alice. Her mother is a real piece of work. Gosh, not like it's her fault she is sick.

And Alex, she sure does need a friend and has one for sure in him. Is there more? The plot thickens
WriteforFun chapter 6 . 5/31/2010
Indeed, Damien is right now all about satisfying his needs isn't he?

Nicely done.
WriteforFun chapter 5 . 5/31/2010
Wow so Alice and her mother don't get along, that is sad, especially now she is sick.

And here we have Alex entering the picture wanting to be
WriteforFun chapter 4 . 5/31/2010
Wow, so Alice is sick and Damien knew it from the start. I wonder how that is going to play in this story...if it does.

Alice is not a pathetic character, she is just more of a mystery yet. I am eager to see her meet Damien again
WriteforFun chapter 3 . 5/31/2010
Nicely done. Damien is clearly a force to be reckoned with and he is quite pre-occupied with Alice.

The sex scene was nicely written, I always find those hard to write so excellent work!

WriteforFun chapter 2 . 5/31/2010
I really enjoyed the dream sequence Alice had. Your way with words are quite good and it is nice to see a well-written story here for they are hard to find.

WriteforFun chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
Hi there

I just came upon this story and this chapter was very well written indeed. I like the imagery and detail you have incorporated into the story.

Damien and Alice intrigue me :)
owlsblood chapter 11 . 4/24/2010
i like it. update soon please
addicted-roxe chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
You blew me away with your story. I really liked it.

I was wondering if you could R&R mine too.

The Golden Orchid chapter 3 . 4/17/2010
this is amazing! keep going :)
BoxedxxxInnocence chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
nice start :) keep it up
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