Reviews for Portraits
jcamholt chapter 5 . 10/2/2012
I would love to read something from Jack's POV
Evil-Angel92 chapter 6 . 3/8/2011
This is really good and it made my brain think. Have you ever thought of maybe having Jack as another love intrest fo Vi?
renegade01 chapter 6 . 3/1/2011
wow...this is really good. i like how you repeated the first two sentences again towards the end. its like a click and then you realise what viola's going to do. ;) she definitely made the right decision...because i'm dying for more action and for more edward - in any order, i'm not picky. ;)
bridgettblah chapter 3 . 2/26/2011
D Meanie Edward knew what he was gonna do to her...but still. He's gotta do something so wonderful, so that he can redeem himself xD He's gonna do something wonderful to redeem himself, right? O.o
pille-ip chapter 6 . 2/25/2011
Wow. This was unexpected, deep, good... I've had moments when I've had deep doubts. These have given me an amazing sense of regaining my inner peace & freedom. But only after I've made a tough decision & got over the guilt about calling something off or saying no. Usually these have been decisions that have been unpopular and against the recommendations of the people around me. But I'd felt like I'd been selling my soul or tearing it in half when i had to continue. This is what this chapter reminds me of - all those difficult decisions in life.
Fuzzyone chapter 5 . 2/6/2011
oh Samson this is by far one of our best works. I am proud of you my friend. mo
pille-ip chapter 5 . 2/2/2011
This was really interesting. I think the facts were really character specific, something we haven't seen before though. But the topic itself is so general that every reader can associate with at least some if not most cases. Happy Valentine's day in advance :)
renegade01 chapter 5 . 2/2/2011
it'd be interesting to see what edward thinks of viola. i think he has more feelings for viola than she thinks he does. although revealing edward's pov might ruin the plot so you simply have to update chaos reunition 'til we get to edward... ;)

it was cute how viola was with her dad. i think i miss that one the most. love these little insights. ;)
Keenon chapter 4 . 1/24/2011
To be honest, I never even considered the fact that he might Leon might actually love Chloe. She just seemed like a replacement to me. I think he was more in love with the idea of her (innocent, naive, everything that Viola wasn't) than her.
Jaymee chapter 1 . 12/28/2010
Maybe Viola's first training session with Jack or chapter 8 in Caden's POV?

...pretty please on the second option?
pittsteeler chapter 2 . 12/28/2010
Jack's my favorite lazy bastard
renegade01 chapter 4 . 7/9/2010
aw, poor leon and chloe. it sounds like leon needs someone who would give viola a run for her money... ;)
pille-ip chapter 4 . 7/8/2010
A good one! Poor Leon though... I guess kittens & wolves do not mix very well...
xNadiiLiciious chapter 4 . 7/8/2010
Jeez, Chloe really got it bad!

Amazing one-shots!
HappyCloudyChic12 chapter 4 . 7/7/2010
I can't wait to hear more about Leon & Chole and if they do end up together. I really doubt it though, she is a sensitive girl.
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