|Reviews for Imprinting|
| Howle chapter 1 . 4/17/2010
I like the idea behind this. The stagnation of the relationship and your joint life is described wonderfully. And there's precious little sharp phrases throughout the poem that makes it truly a worthwhile read.
No poem is perfect though, so I do have to criticize. The only part I didn't quite like was the italicized stanza at the end. I feel like the ending of a poem should bring about the final thrust, the final punch that delivers the best bit of the poem, you know? I feel like if you ended it at "not to me, not to you," the poem would have sounded a lot better.
But nonetheless, I really liked reading this. I'll check out more of your work.
| emilies23 chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
Letting go is so hard. It's a life-long process, I've learned.