Reviews for Lazy Day Wasted
mAcHiNe chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
I LIKE THE LINE "WRAP ME AND ALL I LOVE IN YOUR HYPONOTIC SHINE" because it illustrates well AND it has layered meaning. I also enjoy how u discuss things very personal like ur perspective then switch into ultra vast mode talking about scenery or smell. it dirrectly relates u to everything! which i feel means that you have indeed enjoyed ur lazy days sir. :)in general very well done.
Aerwiya chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
You establish the mood of the piece well with you word choice. One bit that I especially liked was "Sleeping in the warmest pixel/ of this frantic sky." It's an ineresting poem and ends strongly.
SingViolence chapter 1 . 4/16/2010
Delightful, I shall take this in the litteral sense. Lazy days are rare anymore, and they always seem so wasted. As if you could have been even lazier. I love that you refered to change as romantic. Thank you for writing!