|Reviews for Checkers
| Frostbow chapter 1 . 2/3/2014
| Guest chapter 2 . 2/25/2013
This story is amazing but one thing bothers me. In Britain 'shire's refer to counties (a section of the country, like a state in America but a lot smaller), not countries. This might make sense if 'Wilkenshire' used to be a county of Great Britain. Some names which might make a little more sense would be 'The Isle of Wilken', 'The Island of Wilken' or just 'Wilken'.
| animeluver46 chapter 1 . 1/7/2013
Definitely worth the read!
| Snow White's Dream chapter 34 . 12/5/2012
If I manage to stay up for another hour and a bit, I'll manage to be awake for a sunrise :3
Yeah, I kinda maybe perhaps liked this story so much I read through the night. It's awesome though! I really really really like it. Haha, and there I was meant to read the 'rest' of your stories to fill the time until the last few chapters of HBA come out... Shesh. I can't pace myself.
But, GOSH. I loved this! The banter. JUST THE BANTER. *insert incomprehensible noise emitting from my throat* it's just so GOOD. I haven't read any other story of yours except for HBA and this one but, damn can you write!
I should really go to bed now. Me has discovered that eyestrain isn't nice. But hey, those first sun rays will look pretty lovely!
| RomanticTeen chapter 34 . 11/19/2012
So I absolutely love this story and you as a writer. In my past experience as a reader I know there are pretty much three types of writers.
1. The sucky ones who are horrible with detail and leave holes in there writing. And give the main character a horrible happy ending that's too fictional even for a fictional story.
2. The okay writer who is awesome with detail but give the main character that way too happy ending.
3. The amazing writer is is phenomenal with detail and gives kind of a real world spin to a fictional story.
You are defiantly the third type this story is simple amazing. Checka didn't get the crown like I expected but still got her happy ending with Elliot
And speaking of Elliot I absolutely love how you portray Elliot's behavior and character and he is totally the right love interest for Checka. And in the very beginning before I even started reading I was afraid that their wouldn't be any romance because of the way you give the story it's genre. But I was wrong. And I'll admit in the very beginning Elliot was my last choice for Checka. I know that before we even knew Luke and Elliot's names that I want Luke to be her love interest but Julie was interested so he was an automatic no no after that. But than I thought Ethan but he was engaged and the once I ruled that out I was full on supporting Elliot and Checka's relationship. But anyway...
I absolutely love this story and am sad to finish it so quickly(with a day) but I will probably eventually read it again just because it is such a great story!
P.S. I am so jealous of your writing skills one of my secret fantasy's was to become a famous writer but I am a sucky writer.
| Guest chapter 11 . 11/18/2012
Checka's dog is so cute!
| Binkybaby chapter 34 . 11/8/2012
I loved it
| mylittleprincess chapter 34 . 10/23/2012
| geeky-asian-ninja chapter 34 . 7/7/2012
I loved this story! Cleverly written, we are taken on Checker's journey with her. You are a fantastic author, this story had me captivated. 5 stars :)
| Atramento chapter 34 . 12/13/2011
Okay I love this story but there are two things bugging me about the ending. One: Marcus is still out there lurking about and could try the same thing on other unsuspecting people. Why didn't he get in trouble or something? Two: Her dad's ashes. I thought you might have her scatter them somewhere meaningful.
Now that my mini-rant is over let me just say how much I LOVE this story. The characters are intriguing and the plot line isn't just your average cliche...though I do love cliches. Anyways, great story. ;)
| Sheryl chapter 34 . 11/20/2011
Its 2 in the morning and I'm giggling and screaming like a demented fangirl...oh and i have bite marks on my arm because i was trying to regulate my screaming...it didn't work.
3 x9999999! and a zillion more
| RMB4 chapter 34 . 10/6/2011
I just read your story and it was fun. Only thing that annoyed me was how it was supposed to take place in England and therefore complete nonsense. If I were you I would let it take place in a fantasy land and not somewhere in Europe. Now it is a bit too much like those weird American ideas of Europe and European royal families. It is a bit annoying because you know it's not true. As if any European country - even England would be like that and if the people who lived in those countries would behave like that. It's not very believable. If you would let it take place in a phantasy country you wouldn't have that problem. And then I would have been able to enjoy the story for what it is: a little bit cliché, but fun to read.
| LETTSJaM chapter 34 . 8/29/2011
I loved this story. It was really sweet. The character quotes at the top of the page were awesome and finishing with checka was a really nice touch.
| MuffinsRoxSox chapter 34 . 8/14/2011
Oh. My. Goodness. Gracious. Gosh. (My brother is playing the 'Victorious' theme song. It's this show on Nickelodeon. He's a freak. :P) This story is awesome. I love Checka. She is so fun. Oh, and whatever happened to...(bare with me here, I have poor memory when it comes to names.) the bad guy? The one who tried to rape Checka? What an ass. I love the little puppy, Bandit. :)
| bookADDICT6 chapter 34 . 7/15/2011
I am so sad to let this story go! I loved every part of it. It was an emotional roller coaster as well, but it was well worth enduring!