I liked the emotional stuff at the end.. I thought u could've added some more feelings when she was looking at the pictures. it was just a bit too brief. Other than that, it was great

Very intriguing story so far.

It reminds me of the Princess Diaries series, but hopefully this story won't involve a girl who essentially loses her feminist ideas. Anyway, that's going off on a tangent.

I really like your character Franny/Checka. Cool nicknames, by the way.

Hope you update soon.

Awesome story.. UPDATE!

I don't think I've read this story before... huh... anyways, I'll check in to see what's going to happen next, but all I can't say is that you made me remenber my best friend that moved away almost three years ago, thank you.

XOXO

WELL DONE!

i loved it! i really wished you went on with the Sequal i would have loved to see how you would of discribed Checker's and Elliot's wedding since you did so well with Lucas and Julie's wedding!

But if you cannot think of anything for it i completly understand as i can not think of anything for my storys so i totally understand!

Once again GREAT job WELL done i loved it!

i hope to read more AMZING story's from you in the near future!

Very nice story. I loved all of the quotes you had at the beginnings of the chapters. I'm so tired right now. You're making me stay up late tonight because of this. Sigh. I don't think you should continue on with a sequel for this story, unless you really want to. It just doesn't seem fitting for a second one because they had their story and there won't be much to add in when they are married on not much should go on. Great story though

Damn you for making me cry when her father passed away.

And kudos for making me laugh so hard that my eyes began to leak :)

I absolutely loved this, though the whole princess thing was just a tiny bit cliche, as was Luke and Julie. All in all, amazing story. Definitely favoriting this!

Random input: I heard that quote in a book by Holly Black :) Not sure if she's the original person who wrote it, but it's a start!

Amazing story so far :)

I thought I'd mention that I have seen the sky green before :) At night, when the sky is turning to blue. It's more of a green-blue, but it's still green :D

Wonderful story so far! I'll most likely be up all night reading this, it's got me hooked. :)

i really liked it! and i thought it was really cute! :)

charlotte

I only read the summary at the top of the chapter. The reason I stopped reading was because it sounds a little to familiar to the Princess Diaries book's and movies, in which the girl is unpopular ect hate's her life in America then her dad dies and her grandmother comes and gets her and brings her to another country telling her she's a princess and is expected to rule the country one day. So.. Yeah.

this mustve been a nice first kiss...hehe

I LOVED YOUR STORY! You made such an awesome story that I read it in a day! But I don't think you should make a sequal, and I feel like you rushed the end a bit, but all in all awesome!

I Loved this story! It wasn't too sappy or to distant

AH! I. LOVED. THIS. STORY.

You should make like a sequel about their kids (maybe twins) and how they compete for the throne! It would be for SURE complicated...:)

Anyways, I LOVED IT.

~Ronnie~