|Reviews for Checkers|
| metallicdiamond chapter 20 . 6/8/2010
haha, i can imagine Bandit's ears just flying behind him as he ran to get the toy.
I like this chapter alot, I hope her foster family can come over to where she is soon :D
| CrazyInAGoodWay chapter 20 . 6/8/2010
YAY :D heheehe post more soon!
| outsidersgirl chapter 20 . 6/8/2010
this is good
| fullybooked chapter 19 . 6/8/2010
I so can't wait for the masquerade ball!
| DayDreamer 69 chapter 19 . 6/8/2010
I LOVED IT! I can't wait till they kiss! It better be good! haha
hm a fight...
Cant wait~! Literally, dont take to long! :)
| outsidersgirl chapter 19 . 6/7/2010
will you bring any of her friends like nancy in to it back
| 11cina24 chapter 19 . 6/7/2010
Haha, nice spoiler!
Hmm, it's Julie isn't it! She or marcus are going to tell on them from what you said on the spoiler...
That's my guesstamet ;P
Good chappter, like always.
Update or I'm gonna checka spazz on you!
| CleoQueen chapter 19 . 6/7/2010
Oh, this chapter is something. Feelings revealed and all. So the masquerade ball is next? I can't wait now. Even as a filler chapter you did a good job on it.
| CrazyInAGoodWay chapter 19 . 6/7/2010
can't wait for more!
| SeaJade Song chapter 19 . 6/7/2010
please keep wrighting!
| Garneau chapter 19 . 6/7/2010
I love The Hangover too. Absolutely hilarious. ("He was ritard." "What?" "A ritard." "REtard.")
Any way I like the chapter. You are definitely building suspense around this ball. I can't wait to see what is going to go down.
"Who's going to tell on them?" Seeing as you're playing the last person you would expect card, I have my suspicions.
If I could add some opinion, I don't think it would be a completely bad idea to have some more interaction between Elliot and Checka with him distancing himself from her. Then it would reiterate what Luke said and solidfy that idea.
Anyway, I am so excited for the next chapter.
| theprettyreckless13 chapter 19 . 6/7/2010
Okay, I just read the last 3 chapters. It was BRILLIANT and I LOVED it. Now, UPDATE!
| skarpiagirl chapter 19 . 6/7/2010
great story! i really like it (:
| Cassadaga chapter 19 . 6/7/2010
I love this story, as I've already told you. Just to point out, you called Ellie Elliot at one point. I understood what you meant, though, so it's all good. Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter!
| pandakim chapter 19 . 6/7/2010
ahh! they're gonna kiss! and fall in love...?