Reviews for Checkers
Cassadaga chapter 13 . 5/25/2010
aghhshahjahsda I love Elliot. But I like how you're not making it instant, because you're right, it's not realistic.

Please update every day, or twice a day if you can. haha :)

thanks!
HelgaBertoni chapter 13 . 5/25/2010
Loved it, update soon!
SeaJade Song chapter 13 . 5/25/2010
horray for tension! horray for another chapter! and Horray for great stories (meaning this one)
Crystal Red Roses chapter 9 . 5/25/2010
AMAZING im addicted
Endowment's Seraph chapter 13 . 5/25/2010
this is good I really like it. The characters are quite interesting and I'm currious to see where this will go. Write more soon!

~Mel
ClassicStatic chapter 13 . 5/25/2010
Wow! I loved it! It was simply great! I love it. Update soon please.
DayDreamer 69 chapter 13 . 5/25/2010
I wont kill you cause they didnt kiss but they better son! haha I'm loving it! With all my heart, i say,this is AMAZING!

Can't wait for more!

DD
outsidersgirl chapter 13 . 5/24/2010
this is good
Raised with Fangs chapter 13 . 5/24/2010
update quickly! really quickly! and oh, theres a little something something going on here! you should have the little girl and elliot together with the piano and make the girl place her hands on the side, to feel the vibrations, that sure to make her happy!
fullybooked chapter 13 . 5/24/2010
Aww. the was cute!

I always wanted to play the piano, oh well!
DayDreamer 69 chapter 12 . 5/24/2010
Great Chapter :) Hm Eliot does care... *grins*

Have fun moving and good luck with your finals!

Can't wait for the next chapter :)

DD

PS. The lizzards are absolutely adorable :) I'm not really a reptile person either but they are my exeption :)
Garneau chapter 12 . 5/24/2010
Hey,

Really like the chapter.

You really showed the hostile feud between Elliot and Marcus.

Can't wait to see what happens next,

Garneau.
outsidersgirl chapter 12 . 5/23/2010
they were great characters
fullybooked chapter 12 . 5/23/2010
Aww, the dog is so cute!
Raised with Fangs chapter 12 . 5/23/2010
i'll keep it simple- more!
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