aghhshahjahsda I love Elliot. But I like how you're not making it instant, because you're right, it's not realistic.

Please update every day, or twice a day if you can. haha :)

thanks!

Loved it, update soon!

horray for tension! horray for another chapter! and Horray for great stories (meaning this one)

AMAZING im addicted

this is good I really like it. The characters are quite interesting and I'm currious to see where this will go. Write more soon!

~Mel

Wow! I loved it! It was simply great! I love it. Update soon please.

I wont kill you cause they didnt kiss but they better son! haha I'm loving it! With all my heart, i say,this is AMAZING!

Can't wait for more!

DD

this is good

update quickly! really quickly! and oh, theres a little something something going on here! you should have the little girl and elliot together with the piano and make the girl place her hands on the side, to feel the vibrations, that sure to make her happy!

Aww. the was cute!

I always wanted to play the piano, oh well!

Great Chapter :) Hm Eliot does care... *grins*

Have fun moving and good luck with your finals!

Can't wait for the next chapter :)

DD

PS. The lizzards are absolutely adorable :) I'm not really a reptile person either but they are my exeption :)

Hey,

Really like the chapter.

You really showed the hostile feud between Elliot and Marcus.

Can't wait to see what happens next,

Garneau.

they were great characters

Aww, the dog is so cute!

i'll keep it simple- more!