Cute (:

Thank you for the story. I loved it. Somehow, you made it innocent and jaded at the same time (via Marcus and Elliot but more of the latter, obviously) and I appreciate it very much. Keep it up, yeah?

I absolutely ADORED the ending! PERFECT!

D this had a better ending than harry potter 7

It finished? I'll miss the story.. love how he proposed!

Thank you so much for posting this amazing story. I loved Checkers because it appealed to the girl inside me that still secretly wants to be a princess. I can't wait to see what other projects you'll do in the future.

This story was awesome! Of course I'd love every story you could possibly write, but you know, i just needed to clarify. :) GREAT JOB ON THIS! Keep up the amazing work!

boring ending. jk. haha good story i liked it. we should turn it into a movie.

I loved this story! It would be amazing if you did an epilogue though, since you aren't doing a sequel. You could just write about how everyone's lives turn out. It give readers that closure, knowing how the characters end up.

cute:)

I thought the legal system was fine. But, YAY! They're finally...legally.. together!

D of course they would be allowed to be with each...my question where was dell and nancy to give support in all of this?

I'm really feeling this first chapter so far and can't wait to read more! :)

D yay! elliot's back! D now what's parliament gonna say...

aw...i love it!