Reviews for Checkers
Music Read Luv chapter 20 . 3/28/2011
O.O haha i cant wait for the next chapter! Im so happy they kissed! Luke is practically stalking them right now! Haha now isee why dell hasnt called that much,i was just that she should call more often but then this chapter explained to me y. it would he really interesting if dell came to visit... ;)ha update soon! :D
DorkExpress chapter 20 . 3/27/2011
Hope I enjoyed? Oh woman, I love it!

It's so cute that they kissed and almost made an atomic bomb! && Luke, he's my type of guy! So sly and suave, swoon...

By the way, she so wants Elliott! Will there be a little bit more than just lip locking?

We shall see!

Katielove chapter 20 . 3/27/2011
well. that kiss was very much unlike the others (stories i mean) Luke amuses me
Angelica.Eddings chapter 20 . 3/27/2011
I loved the kiss! It was so cute and probably one of the best-written scenes in the story so far. I can tell you had a lot of fun writing it. ;P I cant wait to see what the two will talk about next.
Erin DJ chapter 20 . 3/27/2011
the pace of this story is just right. :)
Katielove chapter 18 . 3/27/2011
Marcusjerk needs to die

ElliotAW. i love him!
Katielove chapter 15 . 3/27/2011
aw :)
Katielove chapter 14 . 3/27/2011
do you still have the original? because i want to read it.
Katielove chapter 13 . 3/27/2011
oh how sad i want to imagine Ellie as 6 years old not twelve.

Elliot and Checka how exciting!
Katielove chapter 12 . 3/27/2011
I think elliot is jealous of marcus.

i see romance in the horizan
Katielove chapter 9 . 3/27/2011
i like the disney qoutes. and i liked he little shove.
Katielove chapter 8 . 3/27/2011
well the ending of this chapter is quite yell-y i liked it though.
DorkExpress chapter 19 . 3/27/2011
oh.. the bestie giving advice to the future girlfriend! How adorably cute!

Man, I swear I could gobble up as much cliched and corny love stories ever written!

Anyway, I want to see Marcus' butt get kicked! That of get dumped in the pond... something still with the completion, no?

anyway, I really want to see what happens with them, will she kiss him?

Princess97 chapter 19 . 3/27/2011
That was a beautiful conversation between Luke and Checkers
DorkExpress chapter 18 . 3/27/2011

The end scene is so darn cute!

Oh, and Marcus.. Oh that Marcus!

Was it even his birthday? Did he really have no one? And what's his story? Why doesn't anyone talk about him... I mean, explain his story? I bet he's done that before, no one just tells someone else "keep struggling, it makes it fun for me"!

Well, I'm off to read the next chapter...

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