Reviews for Kicking Around the Field
Lion12RAWRxD chapter 4 . 11/4/2011
Wow I liked that chapeter haha I like that u kept it realistic and u didnt make like seem fake, and the description made me thibk the whole time I was reading, like im actually picturing this happening in my head and its cool, that rarely happens to me unless I really like the book, I like it
Lion12RAWRxD chapter 4 . 11/4/2011
Wow I liked that chapeter haha I like that u kept it realistic and u didnt make like seem fake, and the description made me thibk the whole time I was reading, like im actually picturing this happening in my head and its cool, that rarely happens to me unless I really like the book, I like it
Lion12RAWRxD chapter 2 . 11/4/2011
So I like it, and jakes a douche, and reminds me of someone I know. Like the second chapter too
Lion12 chapter 1 . 11/4/2011
I like the first chapter cause like that type of stuff really does happen haha and i like that overall its very descriptive
Lady of romance world88 chapter 9 . 5/15/2011
Hi. It's so beautiful chapter and I love it. :) I am so glad that Westley have flashback of her past where it show that she and Max finally be together until the fate have separate them both. Poor Westley. :( OMG Westley and Arianna have huge fight over Jake and Seth. Poor Westley and Arianna. :( I am glad that the coach gave Westley and Arianna another chance until the upcoming game. :) I am hoping that Arianna and Westley will be get along in later on in this story. *hopeful smile* OMG I am wonder who text Arianna? *curiously* I am wonder who's Lena? *curiously* OMG Luke got epilsey. Poor Luke. :( There two ways of epilsey conditions are mild or worse epilsey. I am hoping that Luke's condition is mild otherwise the worse epilsey can lead him to death. It's sad. :( I am wonder how does Luke got epilsey? *curiously* Is it his brain damaged? Or is it dna generation? *curiously* I am glad that Jake is there to comfort Arianna and support her through hard times and good times together. :) Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I can't wait to read the next chapters of this story whenever you have time to update it. Don't stop writing. :D It's amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. Please update soon. :) Just take your time and don't rush anything too quickly. :D
purple.y-goodness chapter 9 . 5/7/2011
Wow. I thought Arianna was just so cold and mean but she does have a good side.

Poor her.

BTW, I love your story! HHAHAHAHA!
3 chapter 9 . 5/6/2011
This is super good! I deffinantly did not see this coming. I like where you were going with this but when the second to last paragraph...epilepsy? I know there is a point where the story seems a little to far out but from what you had said before that, I could see down's syndrome. epilepsy just doesn't seem right.
ANNIII LOVESS YOU 3 chapter 9 . 5/6/2011
RISSA THIS IS THE BEST CHAPTER YET... KEEP WRITTING THESE BABE I LOVE THEM. I WANT TO READ MORE.. GET BUSY AND IF YOU NEED HELP IM A PHONE CALL AWAY. YOUR AMAZING I LOVE YOU!
Anonymous chapter 8 . 4/27/2011
It's good. I really wish there was more to this story. It's a page turner but there are no more pages. The character developement is great. You need to move the plot along more though. I feel like it's dragging on a bit. also, you need to describe how the character looks more. you described less important characters more that your main characters :(
minooker hooker number 1 chapter 8 . 2/24/2011
SO YOU SHOULD KINDA SORTA PUT UP CHAPTER NINE.. IM GOING TO DIE! IM WAITING AS PATIENTLY AS I CAN BUT THIS STORY ISNT WRITING ITS SELF MISSY! I NED MORE MATERIAL TO READ WHEN I HAVE NOTHING BETTER TO DO BUT AM TO LAZY TO GET MY BUTT OF THE COUCH AND LOOK FOR SOMETHING TO DO! HURY HURRY HURY HURY AND UPLOAD PLEASE!

BTDUBSS I LOVE THE STORY ITS STUNNIN...
lovebug101 chapter 8 . 2/23/2011
I LOve this story so much! Please update soon or I feel I will die with anticipation!
Brolinshipper chapter 8 . 2/9/2011
loved it:)
Lady of romance world88 chapter 8 . 2/7/2011
Hi. It is so beautiful chapter and I love it. :) I am wonder how old is Aunt Misa? *curiously* I think a yoga is nice exercise for Westyn. It will relax her and lift her moods. :) I am glad that Aunt Misa try to cheer Westyn up as she tonk her to go to shop to buy things. :) OMG Jake is at store and try to make decision what to buy tampons for his sister. Poor thing. :( How old is Jake's sister? What is her name? *curiously* I am wonder why Jake wants Westyn to be there at bonfire party with him? *curiously* OMG Jake show up and force Westyn to change her clothes. Thats so cute. :) What is so special about Arianna? *curiously* OMG Lauren wants to sleep with Jake. Why can't she leave him alone? *curiously* Why does Jake hate Ryan so much? *curiously* Does Cassie and Jake slept together in past? *curiously* I hope that Jake and Westyn will be item in the end. :D Hurry update soon. Keep writing. :D I am look forward to read the next chapters of your story. Don't stop writing. :D It is amazing chapter and I am enjoy read this story. I love it. Please update soon. :) Listen, read alot of books, watch tv shows, watch movies and listen to musics to get alot of ideas from that. Hope that it will help you to write for next chapters. :) Don't need to blame yourself. Take your time. Don't rush anything at all. :) By the way, I change my pen name from hopelessinromance1988 to Lady of romance world88. :D Remember to research to get alot of information to write it out everything for the next chapters. Good luck with that. :D
Paj Micole chapter 8 . 2/6/2011
It's 10:30 on a school night and what am I doing? oh that's right reading and reveiwing because i wub you. anyway. I'm extremely tired so excuse my honestness. You were concerned about them chemistry but that is the least of your problems. the chemistry is deffinantly there. you problem is establishing things like who sat down next to her and if she made the remark about the ocean or he did. that kind of stuff it what is screwing you up. over all this chapter was a little on the low side of the spectrum for your writing. i know you can do better. the part with misa was phoney. you make misa seem like she has the mental capacity of an eight year old boy... i don't think that is what you were going for. the part in the store and at her house with jake was good but at the part you lost me. i liked the idea of it and i wanted to keep reading but i was consused. you ahve some spelling and typos and it's just confusing. I hope you enjoy this constructive critism m'dear. i'm hitting the sack and my hair will be in a ponytail tomorrow. DEAL WITH IT!
arianna chapter 8 . 2/6/2011
i love this stroy its AMAZING
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