Reviews for White
Twiff chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
A bit hard to comprehend considering i am reading this at night and my mind is a bit foggy, but this was clear yet muffled... Color is something that means everthing yet walking on it means little or nothing to those that don't stop and look. Sad that very few people can stop and look. No spelling erros I can see and it has a rhythmic feel which I enjoy in writing.
ZyggyGirl chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
Wow...I'm kinda speechless after that. You definitely painted mental pictures.

Even though I didn't understand some of it, I don't really mind. Beautifully done!
Velvet Silence chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
Wow, I like it.

Your grammer, however, needs a little work.