|Reviews for My Depression|
| Andrea Lotte chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
I don't really understand the last line of the first stanza. Is it meant to be "forsaked by friends I fear"?
Has a nice rhythm, but I find the language slightly cliche, especially the last stanza. Perhaps you could develop the imagery more and be a little more subtle? I do like how the last stanza has rhetorical questions though. It can be quite an effective end.
| Happy to be Mad chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
Sometimes how I feel... Nice piece.