Reviews for Don't Be Cruel
sonder this chapter 7 . 12/1/2018
Finally. Andrew throws her hypocrisy back in her face. At first, this started out lighthearted and with the classic good-looking guy vs the annoyed, pretty-looking girl but you managed to put your own spins on it. You didn't draw out the "hate," immediately you had her realizing her attraction to him - horrified or not. Usually I abhor instant romances but the horrified part was realistic enough to Elizabeth's character that the attraction didn't seem so out of the left field. Andrew actually isn't that bad; besides, the first time we see him at the airport, he's pretty sensible and it's hard to see him as 'arrogant' (as Elizabeth likes to say over and over again) when I haven't really seen that behavior from him. He's confident yes, but not cocky. I've noticed a lot of writers like to describe their male characters as cocky/arrogant/etc but it's rarer to see the 'show' part of it rather than just the 'telling' part.

I like how you address issues of sexual harassment because so many romance stories romanticize it. And to have a guy acknowledged it? Even more uncommon. As much as you say you've been hitting writer's blocks, the content has been maturing, in the sense that you talk about real life issues, and the characters are fleshing out (mostly Elizabeth and a little of Andrew) nicely.
Guest chapter 7 . 4/10/2018
Pleeeeeeeeese continue! :'(
Toffeeme chapter 7 . 6/13/2016
I would love to see a continuation of this story. Your character are written so well and 3 dimensional. I know the chances are slim since it was updated so long ago, but no harm in trying, right?
toffeema chapter 7 . 9/24/2015
awww, so no hope of an update?! none at all?! I really would love to see where Andrew and Liz go!
EmmBee95 chapter 4 . 10/2/2012
This would make a good movie. Make a screenplay.
wookborm chapter 7 . 1/18/2012
Awwww. :'(

Its been a while since you last updated. A pretty LONG while..

I hope you come back from your break to write another chapter, as I just stumbled upon this story and have come to like Andrew quite a bit. : I'm looking forward to the first kiss, hee hee.

I feel like a perv saying that, but it's the undeniable truth.

Hope you had a merry christmas and a happy new year!

frouwe chapter 7 . 1/7/2012
Does your promise still hold? I hope so. This is the funniest thing I've read lately. I laughed out loud at several parts while reading this. And it's ridiculously cliché, but I'm a sucker for love/hate relationships.

So really, update soon, would you? It's been over half a year.
lulu chapter 1 . 12/8/2011
yes! i'm one of those people who are wondering if you're still alive. :)

glad to see an update from you, albeit not exactly the kind i was looking forward to. here's some encouragement for writing, hahaha. i'll be waiting to see more from you!
AlexisLovesYou chapter 7 . 6/1/2011
Yay! for the update.
Bibi.Love chapter 7 . 5/23/2011
so glad you're writing again! looking forward to the next one, i hope u dont make us wait too long tho :p
breethewriter chapter 7 . 5/16/2011
I love this story more with every chapter :) It was really cute how Liz sucked it up and asked Andrew for his advice. If I didn't know better I would think he's a little bit sad and jealous that she went out with Adam again when he asks her about it at the end of the chapter. Andrew has such undeniable sex appeal, my goodness.
Midnight113 chapter 7 . 5/14/2011
I loved this, thanks for updating. I think Andrew's advice really helped, in its own way, lol. He's so cute and cocky. I can't wait to see what happens next with the second date. Update soon!
natmarie chapter 7 . 5/12/2011
SO I litterally jumped up and down when I saw that this was updated. Definately worth the wait. I'm so glad you braved and were able to conquor the block. I love the whole bit about her thinking about Adam, and her conversations with both Andrew and Nadine, very realistic. I like that she is on slightly friendlier terms with Andrew as well, their dilogue is my favorite. Wow, this is coming off totally gushy and fan girly. Sorry, that was not the intention. But I do love this.
renegade01 chapter 7 . 5/12/2011
Aww, is Andrew a little miffed...hehe. I want more already. I'm greedy that way. Love Liz and her muzzle idea. ;)
EmmaWoodhouse88 chapter 7 . 5/11/2011
Flowed guy is going to end with a messy bang just watch. lol. And I do like the point that Andrew used in he last paragraph. I can't wait to see what happens next!
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