|Reviews for There is no God but Allah|
| XxAmadaXx chapter 1 . 12/13/2010
this is terribly sadding. i am very sure you have just wrote the nearly exact feelings of a Muslim girl.
| colourful-years chapter 1 . 7/20/2010
Hi mehreen! Guess who's joined at last? :) I love this poem, it's really emotional. And the rythm is quite simple so it really sounds like it's being told by a young girl. Brilliant stuff! I've just uploaded some of my writing today I'd appreciate it if you'd be the first one to review it lol x
| CRaZy-OdIN chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
really sad and heart wrenchingly emotive. Very well written, with great artistry. I wish I could write as good as you. It's good to see new work from you, I understand life does get in the way sometimes haha and yes university can be hectic & demanding. Where and what are you studying now? Best of luck with all your exams.
| East-0f-Eden chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
this was a very emotional read for me. I loved the big sister and the way you portrayed her role. I loved that prayer. My fiance says that there are no Muslim prayers to say before you go to bed other than a pillar prayer. But, that one is SO sweet! It reminds me of "Now I lay me down to sleep I pray the Lord my soul to keep. If I should die before I wake I pray the Lord my soul to take." A very sweet story
| Tecna chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
That really is a beautiful and soul-touching poem. Absolutely beautiful! It also tells another story. Well written, loved it!
| blonski chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
Wow, that is heart wrenching. Lovely.