Reviews for prey
chaos called creation chapter 1 . 7/10/2010
Favourite line: "heart clamouring like an angry child"

Oh, nonsensical love that I know all too well.

Keep writing!
recycle rhymes chapter 1 . 7/1/2010
i liked the prosy part of this. it made the poem that much more intense. maybe it was just all the periods.
SingViolence chapter 1 . 4/19/2010
Dark, beautiful, and the feeling is well portrayed. It's unique! Thank you for writing!