Reviews for Dear, Jason |
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![]() ![]() ![]() This is so bittersweet and beautiful, thank you! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I first saw this story at SKOW. At first I didn't give it a second thought because there was no summary but decided to give it a chance. Boy was I wrong. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Amazing. Simply amazing. I love this so much! All the emotion, and the anxiousness, and the twists and turns had me sitting at the edge of my chair, wishing I could read faster. LOVE it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wow! I'm speechless. Really. This was something... woah! It made me cry. It made me smile at the end. It made me feel so many emotions at the same time that I can't even express! Great job! |
![]() ![]() I wanted to review this story again because it is amazing. Even though I have read it before it made me cry again. I can't even begin to describe how you managed to capture all the emotions of the character and project them onto the reader. This is extremely well done! There are a few typo's here and there but it didn't deflect from the overall experience of reading. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This was amazing! I love how you wrote it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() So beautiful! Now i know why you won! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I felt pinpricks of tears as I read this story. It's sweet and sad. I loved the way you crafted it in short paragraphs for the entries, because people never really write long entries for journals anyway - especially if they are handwriting it. This is so wonderfully written and I enjoyed reading it. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw, so sweet. Congrats for winning :) |
![]() ![]() Eek! Take this down! Isn't there a rule that says you should only post the stories on FP after the results come out? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Your story sent me to tears. My boyfriend's name is Jason and he is a marine sniper currently on duty in Iraq. I feel like this story is mine, like you know exactly how I feel how I've felt, though Jason and I are not engaged. As a fellow writer the only input I can give is lengthen each journal entry, descride moments where you miss him more, like the shower bottles. I remember once I was in the grocery store and his favorite song came on the radio and I turned around and his favorite chips were infront of me, Dorito's taco's at midnight, and I had to physically hold my chest together to keep it from ripping itself apart. As a person I can only say thank you a thousand times over. |