|Reviews for napalm|
| themanicurist chapter 3 . 6/1/2010
| themanicurist chapter 2 . 6/1/2010
i know, i know, so keep them coming: i love them so much.
| All Along chapter 1 . 5/19/2010
I only drink scotch, and I spent a year in the American South recently. This may not have too too much to do with your poetry, but I've just returned home with a bottle of The Famous Grouse and I'm very fond of you.
| wayfaringstrangers chapter 11 . 5/17/2010
| for shame chapter 7 . 5/4/2010
i think this is one of my favorites.
i'd rather be a whale beached and in love
than a lonely whale in a sea of fish.
| for shame chapter 6 . 5/4/2010
i like how the last line is contradictory;
antithesis, that's the word.
you usually are so animalistically passionate.
i don't ever remember you asking for a boy to just call you.
but i hope he does, if that's what you still want.
| for shame chapter 2 . 5/4/2010
you have an interesting understanding of the world.
i want that.
but i think it would be an overload of
images and witty lines and bukowski,
and my brain would hang itself.
| for shame chapter 1 . 5/4/2010
i really like the last three lines.
you incorporate the most random rhyme,
and it ends up sounding magical.
i also like the start.
she said yes. makes me wonder what the question was.
it's like shakespeare - he always opens
in the middle of a fight scene,
in the middle of sex, or in the middle
of a conversation. it makes you curious.