|Reviews for The Creation of Carefully Calculated Love|
| 3M2R chapter 2 . 1/8/2012
Just curious, could this be your initial write in present tense? Cause if it ,it's a good start.
Just the tense sometimes irritates me. You jump from past to present and back again. So it gets me rereading cause of the disturbance. Laright, I am ujsed to single tense narration, since majority of the stories out there are in single tense.
I mdt with a lot of problems myself when I wrote a present tense story. It is very difficult but rewarding I suppose.
Keeo writing though, i'll continue to read it.
Oh yes, I adore the prologue. I like how it reads like what someone would say to you. Interesting, I can hear the voice.
About the perspective, I couldn't qite tell in the first chapter. The second was more obvious.
| KryssiHollie chapter 1 . 4/20/2010
Nice! I haven't (and probably never will) write in a boy's point of view. Keep on posting new chapters! Love it! :D