so cute

Short, sweet, and angsty... I loved it!

Very interesting psychological slash here. The mc really pulls me in.

That was a good read. Lacks in story development since things just reach a breaking point, after which all the pieces just fall into place and it's happily ever after, but it was a pleasant read. Thanks for sharing :)

I lOVED this! The first chapter was downright scary. Cam was such a pitiful character, but I just love him and Lex now x3

When I read this, I was expecting some sad ending, which is why I literally jumping and giggling alone in my room when I read the ending... lol

Lexi is so sweet that he made my knee melt. I love your writing style, the way you picture Cam's points of view, how he view himself as someone so dirty that don't deserve any love, how his self-esteem is so low that even when it's clear Lexi like him, he chose to ignore him simply because he'll only make Lexi dirty.

So yeah. This 5 chapters story is way better than any other 50 chapters story with crappy plot and confusing character. Love this )

Question...

Who found him after his attempted suicide.

Nobody new where he lived and this part of the town seems more like: see nothing, hear nothing.

How come he was save at time?

I like your angst. I've read some of your other stuff and angst is my thing so I never really got into it much.

This is heavy stuff. The last paragraph was intense.

this story, the friggin amazing thing that it is, made me fall in love with it. It's short enough to not drag on, but long enough to give it a sense of something good, though i don't know what that is :) either way, i love it

Wow. What an amazing story. It's short, yes, but it's inspirational. So much happens as it is that I don't think you *could* make it longer; I think it's perfect the way it is. :) One comment to note though, is that in the eighth paragraph from the bottom (dialogue included) you have it saying Cam where it should say Lexi. Or at least I'm pretty sure you do. I thought I'd let you know. :P Once again, thanks for this, and congratulations on finishing another story ! :D

So so sad, but so good. Poor Cam, and Lexi must have been so worried! Wonderful things *do* always happen in Costco. Bahaha. *goes onto the last chapter*

What a sweet ending ! I love it (: Though it probably wouldn't have hurt to lengthen the angsty storyline... I kinda liked it while it lasted o-o;

Anyway I'm so excited to see what's up next ! I check everyday cos your stories are so amazing (:

Thank you, this was just the ending the story needed, me thinks. Cute, happy, hopeful and hot.

Just a little note to let you know how much I loved this story, and that it really touched me. So thank you. :)

First of all, i love that song. And i love the movie... Yeah, and I think the song fits the chapter very well.

Most important (for you), I really like this story. It's pretty angsty and dark, but has sweet and some hot too. And while some of the turns are not totally new. They are still not totally foreseeable. Just the right amount of anticipation. I really hope you go for the happy end.