I'v never heard the song you mentioned but reading your story makes me want to listen to it. I love your descriptions. You write very well.

Really nice!

i liked the change to death's POV at the end, I think it was powerful. Also, the imagery was cool. I'm a fan of your writing style!

I really like the simplicity of this narrative because it really comes through with the shorter sentence style and the use of bold one-liners. I also liked the imagery associated with words like "it's cold, it's grasp, it's blinding"-or, should "grasp" but "grasping"? But anyway, I like that you use that repetition because it really settles in for the reader and you get this great overall chill at the end. Also, I liked how you started it with almost like what could be a sigh, "Oh death..." Very cool.