|Reviews for Inheritance|
| charm en route chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
I just remembered! You wrote, "...making his way down the bleachers to Melissa and I."
'I' should be 'me'.
(A good rule for knowing when to use I or me is to take out the other person. You wouldn't say "making his way down the bleachers to I.")
Have a nice day :D
| charm en route chapter 2 . 4/22/2010
Well, I must say that this seems pretty interesting. Although I don't really see what's so bad about the name Azalea...
Oh, and in both chapters you italicized something and forgot to turn off the italic so about half of each chapter is in italics.