Reviews for The Garden Walls
frugale chapter 1 . 4/24/2010
Enthralling. I love the animistic element, and the use of the word 'presumably' in a haiku. Brilliant.
Isca chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
This haiku reminded me of "The Merchant's Tale" from "The Canterbury Tales." The 'garden motif' is very prominent there.

I like the phrasing of "men deep." I don't know why, really; there's just something powerful about it.
Black Sparrow chapter 1 . 4/23/2010
Presumably - but to presume doesn't not mean to be correct. :) This is so true and romantic. Great work :)
YasuRan chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
Hm, this was a bit more difficult for me to grasp but I like anything that gets me in a thinking mood. Thanks for posting!
nickyO chapter 1 . 4/22/2010
I like this one, the end line is great and makes me think about the differences between men and women and if I believe the sterotypes or not.