Reviews for Inside One
Eternal Skies chapter 1 . 5/17/2010
it's difficult to get the gist of it at first, only after reading it a few times, it got to me. you can count it as a good thing, because people reread your lines and so analyze them every time, and also a negative thing because it takes time.

but i loved the contradiction of the things we commonly know. especially in lines like:

"The world one sees,

isn't that of present life.

The silence one hears,

isn't that of peace and quiet.

The image one sees,

is that of another person and not oneself"


i liked the hanged-in-the-air feeling of the last line~