I agree with you, I want to know Mitch's background too.

So just wondering if you are going to finish.. I really loved this story and hate how it ended.. thank you

Please Please Update soon.. Have been dying to know what happens...

I absolutely love this story and don't mind reading a revamped version of it. ) Its the first FP story that has kept my attention in months, to be honest.

and I, your new reader, shall wait patiently til then. :3 Good story so far, and I really can't wait to see what happens next. :3333

Please please tell me you are close to posting again.. Checking back and just waiting.. Can't wait to find out

Hey, this is getting to be too much. No ending to the Wolf family and now, this close to an ending... come on, I really would like to get a finish here on something.

The story has real merit...and it's long, which I like,... along with the gratuitous sex.. chapters could use rewrites but... I'd still like to find out an ending. I'm not sure it adds anything that you call Jason and Brendan "the blond" or "the brunette." Didn't for me anyway. Just sort of noticeable. Overused, as was constantly referring to the football player stuff and the swimmer. Unnecessary. The story doesn't need it. Think we forgot it?

As for writing review,

please, please tell me that this is going to be finished soon! Today is 10/10/11 and I am dying to know what happens. I am not sure when you posted your "note", but I will keep checking back to see if this story is finished. You're a great writer. I have been reading a lot of free fan fiction and I must say you are probably the best I've read so far. The story just flows and it's not choppy and disjointed. It makes sense. And it's a story that I care to finish and keep watching for the next chapter.

Again, I hope to read the end of this story soon. I read all 23 chapters just today and am rivited.

thanks!

...That is so friggin unfair. I am looking forward to a rewrite though. Not to say that the first version is subpar, (I really like it just the way it is) but this way the story will be all new when I read it again! YAY!

I can't wait for the ending.

awesome story! please do update soon :)I just cant keep my eyes off of this story lol!

Oh, Lindsey, you're such a BAMF, going against the FictionPress guidelines and all that. But if it's one thing that's deeply ingrained in me, it's that you don't question the author. You know the story best~ It's gonna be exciting to see the new, improved version. I really enjoyed this one, so my hopes for the rewritten one are great. No need to feel pressured or anything. ;)

oh im actually looking forward to this :) its been so long since you last posted so i kinda forget the finer details of the story this revamp will be awesome!:D

You're the author, its your opinion that counts! I just get to looks forward to updates :) you're not abandoning it and its more work for you, what right do I have to complain? Best of luck in your rewrites, I can not wait for the result, this was amazing first time round so second time will be brill :D

Ha, tease!

I DO understand you though, sometimes it just doesn't feel right, even if only for the author, I feel the same about one of my stories, for other reasons though.

So, I'll sit back and relax and wait what you'll through out. W/e.;)