|Reviews for My Immortal Commentary|
| EmUntitled chapter 18 . 9/2/2011
This is so funny. I've read the first few chapters of My Immortal before and found it hysterical, but it's so much better with the commentary.
Also I think "ps da oder eson dumbeldor swor is koz he trin 2 be gofik so der!" might be:
"P.S. The other reason Dumbledore swore is because he's trying to be gothis, so there!"
| That1Girl chapter 1 . 8/25/2011
you live in minnesota? haha me too XD only my friends and I call it minneSNOWda. lol anyway this is a funny story!
| jghjhgklllkjha chapter 1 . 7/27/2011
Salutations again! I made an account, and decided to review the story again. So... yeah. *adds story to the before non-existant favorites list of this account, backs away slowly*
| hawkfire111 chapter 22 . 7/26/2011
I wasn't going to review again, but I just had to when I read this line:
"So Cujo has magic rabies now. I see. *nervously looks over shoulder, dials phone* Mr. King? The dog died in the book, right? …Right?"
Stephen King's my favorite author, and I just love that line
| hawkfire111 chapter 4 . 7/26/2011
you know, i didn't even know what fictionpress was until recently? God, i feel so dumb. i don't even have an account here. Anyway, off topic.
You are perfect. not only did you post the monstrocity that is My Immortal(which takes guts, as several idiots out there would probably flame you, not getting it thru their thick skulls that you didn't actually write it), but your commentary is just perfect. i only wish i had an account here and could favorite this. then make another account and favorite again. then again. and again. sadly, i'm too lazy to do that, so you'll have to make do with this single review. Sorry.
| Amz chapter 43 . 7/22/2011
I've managed to read every chapter of this, but I think it's only because of your commentary :p haha. It really is brilliant, and had me laughing so much at every chapter :D
I would have been COMPLETELY lost without the commentary :p
It's quite worrying that she thought she shouldn't be flamed for it :p haha
Anyway, thanks for the laughs :D
| o.O - S.A.D - O.o chapter 1 . 6/13/2011
What substance are you on and where can I get some?
| o.O - S.A.D - O.o chapter 16 . 6/13/2011
My friend is showing me some chapters of your stories and I have to say that I'm terribly confused. Apparently she finds it hilarious but if I could read this on my own time and not at school before our finals I would understand this more. So blame this profile user.
| Bobbitt The Hobbit chapter 40 . 4/29/2011
NO! She got Panic and The Beatles too! *to Panic and Beatles band members* I am SO sorry you had to be brought into this.
Great commentary. I forgot to mention that in the last review.
| Bobbitt The Hobbit chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
This story must have been just pages and pages of red on Microsoft Word... Maybe that's why she left it like this?
| Luna333L chapter 1 . 4/13/2011
I mostly stay on , but my friend told me about this horror, and I just needed to look. HILARIOUS, this story nearly gave me a heart attack, but thank you for making it readable hehehehe. Manly stubble. (And boy thingy into mine, Really? Shoot me. Just pull the trigger! Please! *Walks over to bed, shoves face into pillow, muffled shrieks of agony follow I praise both you, and the level 39 troll. BWahahahahaha.
| Kate chapter 19 . 3/24/2011
Whoops the link was messed up:
| Kate chapter 17 . 3/24/2011
So, I wanted to read all of the reviews to My Immortal (because I had a feeling I'd end up laughing really hard,) but it was gone. Instead I found this amazing video, /watch?vY2LmXUL5EuU . The monotone voices are my favorite part, especially in Chapter 4 were you hear a robotic Ebony say Oh Oh Oh, and the get cussed at by a robotic Dumbledore (pronounced Dubledore).
| Kate chapter 6 . 3/24/2011
I think she's 12. Who else says "He put his boy thing-ey in mine". Also the way she worded makes me think she is saying she also has a boy thing-ey. This is ridiculous. If I ever read this I'd probably think it was a joke. A sick demented joke.
| totallyadork chapter 12 . 3/19/2011
wait,wasn't her coffin inside's pink? yes they were hot PINK