Reviews for An Unexpected Journey |
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![]() ![]() This is adorable! I can't wait to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like this very much. I like western adventures. :) Btw, have you ever read a book called The ballad of Lucy Whipple? It's a very good book. This story reminded me of it, for some reason. |
![]() ![]() LOVE IT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Its quite funny how Zacks opinion of Ella drastically changes when he finds that she can cook! ahahaha! Thats what kinda opened his mind about other things, it seemed. Well... you know whats the funny part about it, I remember once during a lecture my teacher said, "The path to capture a man's heart is through his stomach." And I totally BURST out laughing along with the whole class. I thought it was the silliest and most absurd thing... but ehh... it can be true to some men. Greedy pigs. LOL! I do hope you continue your wonderful story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love your story :) Update soon please? |
![]() ![]() Thank you for updating! You are such a talented writer. Love, love, love your stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Did you give up on this story? I hope not, I really enjoyed it. It's been almost 4 months since an update though... |
![]() ![]() Absolutely love it! Please oh please oh please do update! Brilliant story! :D |
![]() ![]() I forget when was the last time i commented but... I:m still reading your lovely story. You're probably really busy but don't give up on this story and I hope (only if its within ur limits) that you can update this story more often. I'm loving the progress, except I guess things need to be spiced up or the story may turn mundane. You're still one of my fav. fictionpress writers! xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aw! Loved this chapter! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Another great chapter! Of course, now I really want to make stew but that's beside the point. ;) I really like how Ella and Zack interact, especially when they're teasing each other. |
![]() ![]() ![]() gr8 chapter :) cant wait for the next one |
![]() ![]() This was a very cute chapter...I'm guessing that Ella wasn't really asleep though. |
![]() ![]() ![]() very sweet ending to this chapter :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Love this chapter! Update soon! |