|Reviews for An Unexpected Journey|
| MarggiS chapter 24 . 5/23/2013
This is adorable! I can't wait to read more!
| ohimamarigold chapter 2 . 4/20/2013
I like this very much. I like western adventures. :) Btw, have you ever read a book called The ballad of Lucy Whipple? It's a very good book. This story reminded me of it, for some reason.
| Guest chapter 24 . 12/24/2012
| Ambyy chapter 24 . 1/3/2012
Its quite funny how Zacks opinion of Ella drastically changes when he finds that she can cook! ahahaha! Thats what kinda opened his mind about other things, it seemed. Well... you know whats the funny part about it, I remember once during a lecture my teacher said, "The path to capture a man's heart is through his stomach." And I totally BURST out laughing along with the whole class. I thought it was the silliest and most absurd thing... but ehh... it can be true to some men. Greedy pigs. LOL!
I do hope you continue your wonderful story :)
| WhisperInTheRain chapter 24 . 10/30/2011
Love your story :)
Update soon please?
| Three chapter 24 . 6/1/2011
Thank you for updating! You are such a talented writer. Love, love, love your stories!
| Nausicaa82 chapter 24 . 5/19/2011
Did you give up on this story? I hope not, I really enjoyed it. It's been almost 4 months since an update though...
| White Wolves chapter 24 . 5/13/2011
Absolutely love it!
Please oh please oh please do update!
Brilliant story! :D
| dwpea chapter 24 . 2/21/2011
I forget when was the last time i commented but...
I:m still reading your lovely story.
You're probably really busy but don't give up on this story and I hope (only if its within ur limits) that you can update this story more often.
I'm loving the progress, except I guess things need to be spiced up or the story may turn mundane.
You're still one of my fav. fictionpress writers!
| Juice423 chapter 24 . 1/19/2011
Aw! Loved this chapter!
| SingingBird812 chapter 24 . 1/19/2011
Another great chapter! Of course, now I really want to make stew but that's beside the point. ;) I really like how Ella and Zack interact, especially when they're teasing each other.
| soccergurl31294 chapter 24 . 1/19/2011
gr8 chapter :) cant wait for the next one
| batzmaru347 chapter 24 . 1/18/2011
This was a very cute chapter...I'm guessing that Ella wasn't really asleep though.
| Ginevra-lily chapter 24 . 1/18/2011
very sweet ending to this chapter :)
| smrae chapter 24 . 1/18/2011
Love this chapter! Update soon!