Reviews for An Unexpected Journey |
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![]() ![]() It's been almost a month since your last update! I hope you haven't abandoned this story! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm glad Zach and Ella had a nice time together but it'll be interesting to see what Ella really thinks of his sudden change of heart. I wonder how hard Zach will have to work to earn her affections after all he's done and said to her in the past. I still say an apology is in order! :) Thanks for the update, I'm looking forward to more! |
![]() ![]() thats a good question...how could he hv been so wrong? hahaha but this chapter was quite sweet. however with all the good things coming along i am sure something bad will happen soon right? ) |
![]() ![]() Wow, it seems that a way to a guy's heart really is through his stomach. Glad that Zach has changed his mind about Ella, but he did seem to change it pretty quickly. How fickle of him. I'm glad he knows the truth now about Ella's cooking ability. |
![]() ![]() ![]() It's kind of funny that even though Zack is acting nice now, he still irrates me. I just don't like the fact that he's so suprised that Ella is a good person. If he hadn't been so judgemental before, it wouldn't have seemed so unlikely that Ella could cook well, was nice, friendly, and smart. But oh well, I'm sure, in time, he'll grow on me. :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yaya! This is definitely a highlight of the story. Listening to Zack think about the food makes me want cinnamon cake too, just to celebrate. I think it's very good that Ella made friends with Dora first because as an older sibling I can see how he would be apprecitative of that friendship, knowing all caring older siblings wants their younger siblings to have lots of friends, fun, and protection. Anyway, I liked this chapter for obvious reasons and I hope you update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love it i like zack |
![]() ![]() ![]() i'm probably being petty, but i don't want these two together until zack apologizes verbally for the way he treated her based off his earlier assumptions. i can see he's going to improve his treatment of her, but i think the words need to be said, so his previous actions won't be glossed over. just my two cents. as always, enjoyed the update! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yay! SO glad they had a nice time and are getting along! And now he knows that it is HER cooking that he has been enjoying so much! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm not sure if I've reviewed yet or not, but if not at least know that I've been keeping close tabs on it! I love it so far, even if Zack has been pretty unfair. Though by the looks of this chapter, he's improved a lot and I can't wait to see what happens once he actually sits down to eat with Ella! Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() E! I'm just more excited to see what happens in the next chapter! I was actually afraid poor Ella would get stuck with one of those men, but of course Zack would save the day. I loved how Justin shouted out $2 before anyone else! Anyway, I'm so glad you update regularly, but I'm really really really looking forward to the next chappie! Have a great week! |
![]() ![]() wt a nice suprise! i really like the subtlety. |
![]() ![]() omg omg omg. I love this chapter. Zack to the rescue! |
![]() ![]() I can't wait until the next chapter when Zack finds out how good Ella's cooking actually is. How did those 3 men know that basket belonged to Ella? |
![]() ![]() ![]() i love it |