Reviews for In The Cookie Jar |
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![]() ![]() Ahhhhhhh! I absolutely loved it! The humour and romance was absolutely on point! Thank you for sharing it with us! |
![]() ![]() This was supsr adorbs i wish they had a whole stlry to themselves but this was awesome |
![]() ![]() ![]() Her character as good pick pocketer is different.. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Anybody else love that random blonde chick that just makes random accusations... |
![]() ![]() Swoon |
![]() ![]() Awwwww |
![]() ![]() Hahaha this is hilarious, I absolutely loved Zee. |
![]() ![]() Can you do a oneshot sequel to this? |
![]() ![]() The ending was one of the best ending I have ever read! I absolutely loved the characters and the humour of the main girl character is really well done. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I made the mistake of starting this story in a location that required silence. Yeah, I've never made so much noise trying to restrain my laughter ever before. Thanks for the guffaws! |
![]() ![]() Okay, you haven't updated for absolute AGES, so I'm guessing you have abandoned this site altogether, and if you have not, WHERE THE HELL ARE YOU?! In any case, fabulous writing! Seriously, this is almost your typical, cheesy high school romance... except it isn't! ... yeah, that made no sense. BUT. Even if the writing's simple, it's nice and sweet and really suits the context you're writing it in. This is literally the first time I have ever laughed so hard at a book. The girl (Zyanya?) is hilarious and sweet, and the most amazing girl of all time. Who wouldn't want her? This was such a cute romance, and the chemistry between them is just... GAH! I can't describe it because I am an utter fail, but I loved this so much! It deserves all the praise it gets! We're all missing you, so I hope you return to this place someday! That being said, YA-BOOYAH! OUT! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very,very good. Excellent work |
![]() ![]() ![]() I cracked up laughing, really, good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() AWESOME! AWESOME. AWESOME. AWESOME. AWESOME! |
![]() ![]() Ahhh...reread...still waiting for "On Being Carly" to be updated...fab as ever xD xoxo, slay |