Reviews for Elemental Escape
Guest chapter 30 . 11/21/2015
The ending was the only thing I didn't like. It was too rushed for my taste. There was no real conclusion
nienorbun chapter 1 . 7/16/2015
There was a lot I really liked about this story; the characters were interesting and well-developed, the concept was engaging.
Maybe needed a bit of editing, but my main issue is the ending - it seemed like you got sick of the story and just wanted to finish it off as quickly as possible. Would have welcomed a bit more setup for that ending.
Otherwise, really awesome :)
Ari chapter 30 . 3/14/2015
This is an amazing story good job and write some more stories like theses please
Elle chapter 5 . 2/19/2015
Ok, I love your story but a few things don't make sense.

I am guessing from what you told us in chapter 1 that V is 18 and Cohryn is in his late 20's (26-27). Umm, that is only 9 years apart... and if they are father and son... get what I am saying? But it is really good.
Vernoodle chapter 30 . 2/17/2015
Good story! I really enjoyed it. :)
Vernoodle chapter 15 . 2/16/2015
Lol! Love it
InkLeaf chapter 1 . 12/23/2014
Wow, I wonder what the boy's power is...
Guest chapter 30 . 9/8/2014
nice story. couldnt stop reading :)
GracefulAlexis chapter 17 . 4/5/2014
Luke, I am his father. Oh my gosh, you totally did that on purpose! Blargh. This is the best story I have read in a while, I really like it. A few parts could be edited a bit, but I can totally see this becoming a bestseller if you publish it in a book!
Thanks for writing this beauty!

Guest chapter 30 . 10/24/2013
sure, there were a couple little spelling mistakes but the plot... wow! spectacular job here :)
Venri Payrus chapter 30 . 7/13/2013
Reading this in 2013 _ so sad the story is over:/ I literally finished it in one day, it was so good! And I think I developed a little crush on V 0.0 it's really great, I hope to see those characters in other stories :D
Maggie odonoghue chapter 30 . 6/18/2013
Good but the ending is a bit of a let down
Maggie odonoghue chapter 24 . 6/18/2013
The dream is slightly obviously derived from Alice in wonderland.
julian.hughes1 chapter 30 . 2/17/2013
i just finished the whole book. it was great the story line was wonderfull and the plot kept me reading. well done i will wait for your next.
Guest chapter 30 . 1/24/2013
:O i... fell... in... love... i mega heart this! ive won a few writing comps but this blows any short story ive ever writen or read, outta the water!
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