|Reviews for Elemental Escape|
| leavesfallingup chapter 6 . 4/13/2011
I'm pleased to see that there is more to Sub M than first meets the eye. His are perhaps the most cruel enhancements, since Cohryn seemed to have stolen his humanity... but maybe not?
| leavesfallingup chapter 5 . 4/13/2011
Okay, so I got it wrong: he wants to sell them to the military. Once again the super-soldier concept raises its ugly head. What is truly frightening is that there have been so many real attempts to do just what this fictional doctor has done.
| leavesfallingup chapter 4 . 4/13/2011
You wrote: "When did I start relaying on others" I think that you meant "relying."
It sounds to me like Cohryn wants his creations to escape and move freely around the world. Unlike the other scientists, he views himself as a creator, and a creator would want to see his creations reach their full potential, regardless of the consequences.
Just a guess.
| leavesfallingup chapter 3 . 4/13/2011
The scientists are so casual about "neutralizing" the children. I hope that you have devised a suitable punishment for them in the end.
| leavesfallingup chapter 2 . 4/13/2011
This is a very fascinating story thus far. I look forward to reading more. The way that you slowly reveal the details through Subject A's own discovery keeps the story interesting.
| Kala chapter 30 . 2/21/2011
Ahh! i haven't checked this is for ever!
I was starting to think you just weren't gona finish it
I loved it!(: a bunch i really hope you continue to make storys.
| CrossMyHeart chapter 28 . 2/5/2011
why did you kill kitty?
| Lissaroxs chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
I loved it. This story makes me loves sci-fi even more then I had already did.
| Anonymoso chapter 30 . 1/28/2011
Seemed rushed. Was very confusing, but I'm sad to see the series is over. :(
| xXxfantasyfreakxXx chapter 30 . 1/27/2011
It all seemed a little rushed to me i think you could have done better but still i like it and i think you should continue.
| Major Samantha Carter chapter 29 . 1/24/2011
Hey, it's Major Sam Carter (not rlly) again, but now I have an account! I don't feel comfortable giving my name away online, so I use the name of my favorite TV show character.
Anyhoo, I luv this story! It's great and it's inspired me to write a story of my own, not that unlike it! Don't worry, it's very different. I wouldn't want to copy off your brilliant work.
| kq101 chapter 26 . 1/23/2011
I just went through and read the 30 chapters that are out and i have to say- this is a great story! You have exelent discription and the characters keep in character and don't have unrealistic strenght with no real weakness!
And the reason why i posted this review on chapter 26 instead of ch 30 is because chs 25 & 26 are the same chapter, thought you might want to know.
Please keep writing this great story!
| Major Samantha Carter chapter 30 . 1/23/2011
(again - yeah, right.)
I'm totally hooked on this story! I stayed up until one o' clock last night reading it. You need to post more or I think I might die!
| Major Samantha Carter chapter 24 . 1/23/2011
(Major Carter. Yeah, right.)
lol alice in wonderland! if you're planning on getting this published, though, beware of copyright laws...
| Major Samantha Carter chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
(Major Carter. Yeah, right.)
I really like it! The writing is great, the storyline is intriguing, the characters are believable. You might want to change the title to something a little less literal and more eye-catching.