Reviews for Elemental Escape
leavesfallingup chapter 6 . 4/13/2011
I'm pleased to see that there is more to Sub M than first meets the eye. His are perhaps the most cruel enhancements, since Cohryn seemed to have stolen his humanity... but maybe not?
leavesfallingup chapter 5 . 4/13/2011
Okay, so I got it wrong: he wants to sell them to the military. Once again the super-soldier concept raises its ugly head. What is truly frightening is that there have been so many real attempts to do just what this fictional doctor has done.

Next chapter...
leavesfallingup chapter 4 . 4/13/2011
You wrote: "When did I start relaying on others" I think that you meant "relying."

It sounds to me like Cohryn wants his creations to escape and move freely around the world. Unlike the other scientists, he views himself as a creator, and a creator would want to see his creations reach their full potential, regardless of the consequences.

Just a guess.
leavesfallingup chapter 3 . 4/13/2011
The scientists are so casual about "neutralizing" the children. I hope that you have devised a suitable punishment for them in the end.
leavesfallingup chapter 2 . 4/13/2011
This is a very fascinating story thus far. I look forward to reading more. The way that you slowly reveal the details through Subject A's own discovery keeps the story interesting.
Kala chapter 30 . 2/21/2011
Ahh! i haven't checked this is for ever!

I was starting to think you just weren't gona finish it

silly me,

I loved it!(: a bunch i really hope you continue to make storys.
CrossMyHeart chapter 28 . 2/5/2011
why did you kill kitty?

Lissaroxs chapter 1 . 1/28/2011
I loved it. This story makes me loves sci-fi even more then I had already did.
Anonymoso chapter 30 . 1/28/2011
Seemed rushed. Was very confusing, but I'm sad to see the series is over. :(
xXxfantasyfreakxXx chapter 30 . 1/27/2011
It all seemed a little rushed to me i think you could have done better but still i like it and i think you should continue.
Major Samantha Carter chapter 29 . 1/24/2011
Hey, it's Major Sam Carter (not rlly) again, but now I have an account! I don't feel comfortable giving my name away online, so I use the name of my favorite TV show character.

Anyhoo, I luv this story! It's great and it's inspired me to write a story of my own, not that unlike it! Don't worry, it's very different. I wouldn't want to copy off your brilliant work.
kq101 chapter 26 . 1/23/2011
I just went through and read the 30 chapters that are out and i have to say- this is a great story! You have exelent discription and the characters keep in character and don't have unrealistic strenght with no real weakness!

And the reason why i posted this review on chapter 26 instead of ch 30 is because chs 25 & 26 are the same chapter, thought you might want to know.

Please keep writing this great story!

Major Samantha Carter chapter 30 . 1/23/2011
(again - yeah, right.)

I'm totally hooked on this story! I stayed up until one o' clock last night reading it. You need to post more or I think I might die!
Major Samantha Carter chapter 24 . 1/23/2011
(Major Carter. Yeah, right.)

lol alice in wonderland! if you're planning on getting this published, though, beware of copyright laws...
Major Samantha Carter chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
(Major Carter. Yeah, right.)

I really like it! The writing is great, the storyline is intriguing, the characters are believable. You might want to change the title to something a little less literal and more eye-catching.
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