|Reviews for Elemental Escape|
| leavesfallingup chapter 30 . 4/14/2011
An excellent story. I'm sorry that I stopped reviewing every chapter, but I just had to go to the next. I will definitely read more of your work.
| leavesfallingup chapter 17 . 4/13/2011
I was wondering from the time Cohryn caught them if he had some sort of device in the truck that would protect him from V... I guess not.
This promises to be interesting from here. I'm sure that the other scientist lady won't want to let them get away.
| leavesfallingup chapter 12 . 4/13/2011
Luke found his mom; that's great! It makes me wonder how he was chosen in the first place. I assumed that they grabbed orphans. Obviously they focused on children who had the right genetic structure?
It is interesting that A had a poor self-esteem problem concerning her looks, but in normal society people think that she's beautiful.
| leavesfallingup chapter 11 . 4/13/2011
I thought for a moment that the dog, Genus, would steal for her. The snake idea was better, as long as nobody died of a stroke. The sunglasses are the perfect solution for her eyes too.
| leavesfallingup chapter 10 . 4/13/2011
So Cohryn did expect M to rebel. You still have me wondering if M is really in league with A or if it is all part of the scientist's evil plan.
I can't imagine that Cohryn wants to place his experiments back under the control of Barquet, so the suspense is intense.
| leavesfallingup chapter 9 . 4/13/2011
It is beginning to look like A has two jealous males on her hands. That could become very interesting later.
| leavesfallingup chapter 8 . 4/13/2011
I feel sorry for the little mouse that got left behind, not that he would want to be close to that snake anyway.
| leavesfallingup chapter 7 . 4/13/2011
I'm probably wrong, but I have the suspicious feeling that Sub M didn't really rebel against Cohryn. It would be in Cohryn's best interest to have the duo believe that M was on their side, and having him attack his master seems like the best way to win their confidence. M was ready to kill the other scientists, but he only hurt Cohryn.
| leavesfallingup chapter 6 . 4/13/2011
I'm pleased to see that there is more to Sub M than first meets the eye. His are perhaps the most cruel enhancements, since Cohryn seemed to have stolen his humanity... but maybe not?
| leavesfallingup chapter 5 . 4/13/2011
Okay, so I got it wrong: he wants to sell them to the military. Once again the super-soldier concept raises its ugly head. What is truly frightening is that there have been so many real attempts to do just what this fictional doctor has done.
| leavesfallingup chapter 4 . 4/13/2011
You wrote: "When did I start relaying on others" I think that you meant "relying."
It sounds to me like Cohryn wants his creations to escape and move freely around the world. Unlike the other scientists, he views himself as a creator, and a creator would want to see his creations reach their full potential, regardless of the consequences.
Just a guess.
| leavesfallingup chapter 3 . 4/13/2011
The scientists are so casual about "neutralizing" the children. I hope that you have devised a suitable punishment for them in the end.
| leavesfallingup chapter 2 . 4/13/2011
This is a very fascinating story thus far. I look forward to reading more. The way that you slowly reveal the details through Subject A's own discovery keeps the story interesting.
| Kala chapter 30 . 2/21/2011
Ahh! i haven't checked this is for ever!
I was starting to think you just weren't gona finish it
I loved it!(: a bunch i really hope you continue to make storys.
| CrossMyHeart chapter 28 . 2/5/2011
why did you kill kitty?