Reviews for Elemental Escape
xXxfantasyfreakxXx chapter 30 . 1/27/2011
It all seemed a little rushed to me i think you could have done better but still i like it and i think you should continue.
Major Samantha Carter chapter 29 . 1/24/2011
Hey, it's Major Sam Carter (not rlly) again, but now I have an account! I don't feel comfortable giving my name away online, so I use the name of my favorite TV show character.

Anyhoo, I luv this story! It's great and it's inspired me to write a story of my own, not that unlike it! Don't worry, it's very different. I wouldn't want to copy off your brilliant work.
kq101 chapter 26 . 1/23/2011
I just went through and read the 30 chapters that are out and i have to say- this is a great story! You have exelent discription and the characters keep in character and don't have unrealistic strenght with no real weakness!

And the reason why i posted this review on chapter 26 instead of ch 30 is because chs 25 & 26 are the same chapter, thought you might want to know.

Please keep writing this great story!

~kittyqueen101
Major Samantha Carter chapter 30 . 1/23/2011
(again - yeah, right.)

I'm totally hooked on this story! I stayed up until one o' clock last night reading it. You need to post more or I think I might die!
Major Samantha Carter chapter 24 . 1/23/2011
(Major Carter. Yeah, right.)

lol alice in wonderland! if you're planning on getting this published, though, beware of copyright laws...
Major Samantha Carter chapter 1 . 1/22/2011
(Major Carter. Yeah, right.)

I really like it! The writing is great, the storyline is intriguing, the characters are believable. You might want to change the title to something a little less literal and more eye-catching.
kittygirl27 chapter 30 . 1/22/2011
aw! great chapter! I really love V/A. It's so cute! :D
UNDERLANDERfromtheOVERLAND chapter 29 . 1/7/2011
Okay, I love this story. the characters you created are amazing, however, I think it could us a littole more action or emotion, I havn't really been able to connect with the characters.
UNDERLANDERfromtheOVERLAND chapter 24 . 1/7/2011
100th reveiw, and I love the Alice-in-Wonderland like scene here!
Kala chapter 29 . 1/5/2011
Well it's about time!(:

I Loved it please keep updating!
Writerandreader chapter 29 . 12/28/2010
Very very very good chapter though it's one of ur shorter chapters. Keep it up, I like this story.
AJDG chapter 29 . 12/28/2010
This is a very good story. Just read all the chapters today. I couldn't stop! Can't wait for the next Chapter.
xXxfantasyfreakxXx chapter 29 . 12/28/2010
sounds good. Good Job!
kittygirl27 chapter 29 . 12/28/2010
this story is really good! I just read all 29 chapters in one sitting!
xXxfantasyfreakxXx chapter 28 . 12/22/2010
this was great lol surprised they didnt actually go farther but i guess it wasnt the most romantic place lol
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