OKay, maybe ONE more chapter. I suppose it's useless to hope you turn into a horrible writer in the next chapter so I can stop binge reading? I know I have issues when it comes to cheating, which is strange because I've never been lucky enough to be in a relationship so I can't even blame it on past experiences but it just seems so hurtful and I really really don't like hurting people.

Struggle: OCD wants to finish what i started. Cheating is a dealbreaker for me though, break up first then I'll be heartbroken but at least you know where you stand/crumble. Cheat & it says you're not important enough for your feelings to be considered so I'll just be as disrepectful as I can to a person I told I loved. Maybe I can make it another chapter before it's just too depressing.

Their loyalties seem clear to me.

Brendon should have made it official if Mars didn't have the balls too, he still cheated, and will have hurt Josh. If your happiness has to hurt others you are an arsehole and don't deserve happiness, which with cheaters is usually the case as who can trust someone they've been betrayed by? Though also usually cheaters don'e care.

Not so sure I want to read on now, have very STRONG views about cheating. You can change your mind but if you don't break up with your current first it should be a minimum of 25 years in prison, no parole!

Pulling me along no problem, good flow and expo.

Uhm, what's with all the girl-hate?
I get that these characters are supposedly the hottest, most adorable boys in town, but these girls at least appear to be mildly intelligent, they shouldn't be made into pathetically wailing laughing stocks for the purpose of giving M and B extra praise. And the way Brendon heartlessly comments on Stella's crying? Ugh. He's not a nice guy, and the opposite of a gentleman. Mars also handled that extremely poorly, considering she's supposed to be his best friend. Never would I want a friend like Mars. He figuratively punched her in the face by ruthlessly attacking her feelings like that.

I like the way this story flows, but this is too much. Girls shouldn't be bashed for the sake of elevating the main gay couple.

(Sigh) I love Nevershoutnever! I also love this story :)

I have to say that I find this story very good because it is so fast-paced though I must admit that I miss the humour aspect of your other stories! Please bring more funnies into it later...they're what enthused me in other stories. Other than that, I am thoroughly enjoying the story and will continue reading!

Update please! :(

wow I never thought he was going back that soon. Cant wait to read more of this.

this was so emotional. Brendons a nice guy. I think that he n Mars should keep in touch and see what happens if they can b together again or not. I like that Justing asked Josh out. I think theyd do good together. I like Jake, I feel related to him, very much.

this is very sad

Jakes nice. I like him too. He seems like a good friend.

making it to favorite!