Reviews for Hell Girl
PoetryMagic12 chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
A really nice poem...though some advice I think the line "My love s like the roses that have bloomed," could be changed to simple "My love is like the roses that bloom" this is just my opinion...your the author...you can keep it the way it is...

my favorite line though "Have now withered petal by petal. You did a great job...keep writing

Also if you like you can read my poems...I have four up now...I would like your opinion...it would mean a lot..but you don't have too...I am going add this poem to my favorites though
Aida Rose chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
Heavy. I like it. All of it goes together and just flows pretty well. I think I get the gist of it, but...I dunno. Were the apostrophe's kept out on purpose?

Though, in the second stanze's second line, in my humble opinion, you don't need the 'plain'. But, that's just my opinion.