Care is becoming so bold! I thought maybe you should listen to Lucy Rose "Shiver". It's what I imagine as Care voice. Unless you have another muse.

The girl that was once invisible is no longer invisible. I guess she is on somebody's radar to be put onto the list. First of all, I can't believe Paisley said she wanted to kill Savannah. I wonder if she wants to do that regardless of what just happened. Paisley does hate Savannah anyways. But I do hope that it is more than that and that there is some kind of bond between Paisley and Care. Second of all, Dorian agreed with Paisley. Finally! With this list having Care's name, I guess we may be seeing more of Patrick and Savannah. I'm super excited! At this point, I can't even tell what is going to happen. This story is so unpredictable and amazing. :)

I loved the new name of their band. The way Care described why Jeremy liked it reminded me a little bit about The Breakfast Club. I can't believe Paisley and Care spent some time together. Well it was more like Care needed a ride but still. I am not sure if Paisley said what she said in the end to help Care or not. I guess she sees as the truth. From what we learned about DC, it seems like it can be true. But I hope that Care if more than just a novelty to DC. We learn more and more about DC's past. I cannot imagine what DC had to go through. Again, I am so proud of Care for singing instead of running away. The singing coach was kind of a b****. But her method did work. I am glad that Care channels her anger to singing.

This chapter was amazing. I didn't realize until now how closed off Dorian was. After 21 chapters, we finally learn more about Dorian. Over and over again, we kept seeing Care coming out of her shell and learning more about her. But as this happened, I honestly didn't realize we barely learned much about Dorian. I am glad to see a glimpse of his past. His past is so painful, you could barely even tell. I love the line where Care is saying how he puts up a show and terrified of really feeling. Looking back, we can see how Dorian is very charming. He's great with the ladies, with his friends, etc. But it is his music that speaks more louder than anything he says. I am so glad to see Care singing in the end. I just hope that she holds onto that feeling she gets from singing and keep singing.

This is too cute! He can't sleep without hearing her voice! If it wasn't DC saying that, I would think it would be creepy. It would also be creepy if any other guy comes in and breaks into my room. Then sleeps with me. OMG I LOVE DC! In a way, I still think this whole list thing is important. I don't know how but I definitely think it is. I am not sure who is posting this. It could be DC. It could even be Patrick. IDK. I'd like to see more of Patrick. We don't really know him but I think he seems interesting and probably a jerk. I wonder if we'll ever see how important Savannah is to DC. They once needed each other and I wonder if they'll need each other again. I swear if DC hurts Care I'm going to be so mad. I trust him. Care's mom trust him too.

Oh. My. God... WHO PUT CARE ON THE LIST? :O

It's decided. I loving hate Dorian Christopher Birch.

From the very beginning, I knew he was a pain in the ass. Talking to Care like that! He probably does that to a lot of girls! If he could make Care feel the way she's feeling, then I have no doubt he could do it to anyone. Dorian's a manipulative asshole who likes to get things his way. He KNOWS how Care feels about him! Care's fucking in love with him, and he's using it to his advantage without even knowing he is. He feels heroic by pushing Care around like his puppet? What an ass.

Can I get to the part where he's SOOOOO clingy? Like wtf is his problem? I don't get why Care's so loving in love with him! He calls her in the middle of the night and no matter how many times she refuses, he uses his "sincerity" to make her talk. Leave the girl alone, ass. His recent visit to her room was beyond creepy. If I was visited by my next-door neighbor, I'd definitely call the cops! Its so inappropriate! It's like Edward Cullen creepy, which I don't approve of!

When they were in the kitchen in his house, I swear to God, I might've cut off his head and put it in where it belongs (his ass). He should've just resorted to popping corn rather than TRYING top pop her ass. He annoys the gently carress out of me. He doesn't deserve to play with Care's feelings that way! Asshole.

I love the last few chapters because of Carleigh's character development. This is the part where I somehow understand what Care liked about DC. He's believed in how she's stronger than how people thought she was, but then again he's still an ass for the many reasons above. I'm starting to feel like this isn't supposed to be a romance book, but it's more of a finding yourself kind-of book. In which I'm not complaining, but makes me sort of relieved because I want Care to be stronger and I want her to succeed in her singing career (and not die with drug overdose). The moment she said she was tired of being pushed around, I suddenly became the proud mama Elyse was in the earlier chapters.

Last thing, I want DC to stop pursuing her, or calling her, or touching and kissing her in some kind of way she's uncomfortable with. I want him to just stop. Go with Paisley, for God's sake!

What a...bitch?
I reckon I should probably be pissed off at Dorian and cut Paisley some slack but y'know Care, I've got your back.

I'm just waiting for the whole story to come out because I'm sure Dorian has an explanation, props to Care for holding a head high every time he goes and messes something up.

YOU HAVE NO IDEA HOW HAPPY I WAS TO SEE THAT YOU UPDATED! I was happy but then I was worried. I was worried that you'll leave an author's note saying how you'll never ever ever update this story again. I SERIOUSLY LOVE THIS STORY! It is one of my favorite. I miss this whole gang, from Care to DC to Perry. I just want somebody to kiss somebody, UGH. . . I don't care who makes the first move. OMG, DC is so great with words. When he was talking about how much he wanted to kiss her, I nearly just died. He is so smooth. With his words, I can see why the girls all like him. I would be all over him too. The sexual tension between Care and DC is too much! The whole band probably can feel it. Perry just loves teasing the two about it. I can't believe DC met Care's mom. I have to say if I was in DC's position, I would just die from Care's mom's questions. She is one scary, protective mother. I was glad to hear Care share her story of why her mom dislikes the general idea of music and the band. It was great trying to understand the complexity of these issues. Now I wonder how DC's dad will be like. One thing I really love in the end was how mad Care got at DC. I love how she like is starting to seem like she doesn't take crap from DC. I'm glad that she is growing more as a person.

THANK YOU FOR THIS UPDATE! This story is so amazing. I really really hope you will continue updating this. I look forward to seeing more of Care and DC. :)

I don't think you can quite comprehend how goddamn excited I was when I got the email for this update! I'm just so happy! I've spent the whole day rereading the whole thing so I could truly savour the new chapters and let me tell you it was a day well spent! Ugh I love this story so much! Can't wait for the next update! :)

OMG i was soooo happy when I saw that you had finally updated this story again! Idk how to thank you, I thought you were never going to update this story again but I was wrong and I am so happy that I was! THANK YOU and please update soon

There's a lot I could say but it'll probably come out as incoherent babbling because I'm THAT glad that you're back, and even better with this near to completion... I'm just going to go start this all over again.

Great chapters, great story, great writing. It's good to have you back! :)

write more please im dying to know more. XD

I love the slow change in the character, from not tossing the kiss off as a mistake, to Car slowly realizing how serious the band is. All of it makes a story that completely captivates you in the future. I can't wait to see where it goes from here. I feel like we're so far from the climax of the story and that it might never happen. Anywho keep up the writing.

Love this, can't wait for the next installment!