Reviews for Universal Choking Sign
AnonymousReads chapter 15 . 9/5/2013
Yay new chapter. I couldn't tell if paisley was tryin to make her jealous or if she actually liked him. I hope she can come out of her shell a little more. Can't wait to see the next chapter. Update soon. Please. :)
Damned to heaven chapter 15 . 9/5/2013
Almost regret reading the chapter 'cause now I want more.
Oh Care, you're awesome!
And DC, you charmer, you!
bookppl93 chapter 15 . 9/5/2013
Awee, they're so adorable
TK Orly chapter 14 . 8/21/2013
This story is absolutely amazing!
bookppl93 chapter 14 . 8/19/2013
Gahhh you're amazing 33
RueRue1396 chapter 14 . 8/19/2013
what to say?
Okay...this is-loving-fanta-loving-istic. While i love all the other characters DC, Perry, OMG Elyse, the whole band and DC (because i had to mention him twice), I loving love Care.
She is so unique and her voice ( as a narrator) is superb. I gotta say though at the beginning she seemed kinda stiff rather than shy. But then you introduced Elyse and her reaction to Patrick confronting her made me laugh and still does.
This is fun, realistic** and it is definitely made my day.
random.walker chapter 14 . 8/18/2013
Yay! another update :) i really love the way you're developing Care's character and the pace in which she's overcoming her stage fright. It's slow but that's what makes it so realistic. I'm glad though that the others finally got to hear her. heck, you make me wish that I could hear her too :) i also loved how you settled her "fight" with Elyse. like how some fights are just due to miscommunication and how simple it is to just make up. overall, another great chapter :) thanks for the update! really made my day, haha :D
AnonymousReads chapter 14 . 8/17/2013
I loved this chapter. She's really getting there! I'm so excited for her & I wish I could hear her voice if it was that good. I am so excited to see where it goes after this. This story is just amazing I absolutely love it. Update soon. Please. :)
leavesfallingup chapter 14 . 8/16/2013
I'm curious how you will take her from where she is now to being able to sing on stage. Granted, she has an amazing voice (according to everyone in the story) but if she gets nauseous and she loses focus just listening to her own voice on the recording...
Sere-Imri chapter 14 . 8/16/2013
Whenever I read a part with Care and DC my heart throbs. And Care has been voted in! Yay! I cannot wait to read the following chapters. Your writing is so chock full of emotion! I mean, I swear I almost had an anxiety attack for Care when they were listening to her singing! This story is definitely a huge favorite of mine.
blackbirds fly chapter 14 . 8/16/2013
THAT WAS SO GOOD. Like that conversation at one in the morning was on point. The emotion was very clear and DC's feelings and Carleigh's reactions could be interpretted so well even without so many words. PAISLEY NEEDS TO GET HER SHIT TOGETHER like
obviously Care is good and I really hope her stage fright deminishes. I can't wait for the next update!
SimplyDevine chapter 14 . 8/16/2013
I love your story.
Seriously, I check my story updates every day, sometimes twice a day just to see if you have updated because I can't wait for the next chapter. I started reading when you first started writing this and I fell in love with it then, but your re-write is even better. I love Care and DC and their chemestry, I love how you bring all your characters to life and not just the main ones and I am so totally a Perry Fan (with a capital F).
Keep up the good work D I cannot wait for the next chapter!
blackbirds fly chapter 13 . 8/11/2013
I think Carleigh would really piss me off if she hadn't wedged herself into my heart so quickly. There is something very endearing and quirky about her, and you can't help but love her even when she goes mute and even when she throws up in public. I'm completely behind her in this story and I love her viewpoint and how beautifully you characterized her.

The fact that, in general, the story quickly drew my attention from the very first paragraph, is really great. I like how each characters' personality is very distinct and their habits, ways of speaking, attitudes, ect. are easily distinguishable. Madison is the only one in my opinion, whom I haven't picked much up from, but she's pretty minor and the wonderful characterizations from all the rest make up for that. The strange nicknames is also another aspect that I enjoy. These characters will definitely be very memorable. Like I won't ever be able to forget that kid DC with the guitar named after Elvis. Overall, I really enjoyed the first 13 chapters and the mix of humor, awkwardness, sentiment, drama, romance, and general insanity as well as the creativity formed by the plotline itself. I can't wait for the next update!
Avide chapter 13 . 8/8/2013
Know what? This story grew on me.

I like the main character, I like Elyse, and things between the protagonist and DC have progressed pretty nicely.
random.walker chapter 13 . 8/2/2013
I’ve been a silent reader for quite some time now, and, well, I’ve finally decided to review :). I just wanted to tell you that I absolutely love your story. I think it has something to do with the fact that I can totally relate to Care and her shy, and scaredy cat tendencies, haha. Really though, I love your characters and how they’re different (from the usual protagonist, etc.). On a side note, I'd like to tell you that your story has officially become my feel-good story. Thanks for the update! :)
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