Reviews for Jack and Jill
PopMakesMeBurpy chapter 1 . 8/26/2010
I love this. Fractured fairy tales are, in my opinion, always better than the original. This seems much more realistic. Have you ever considered doing more fractured fairy tales?
GraziaArmonico chapter 1 . 7/18/2010
I never knew that! It was the Grog's fault all along! Now why didn't they tell us THAT in preschool? Maybe more little kids wouldn't have grown up and become addicted to things because they'd be thinking of poor Jill and... ok I'm getting carried away... lol but this was very clever, I praise your creativity once again ;)
alexjockey chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
quite a weird interpretation.

makes you think of the nursery rhyme in a different way.
PyroPsycho x-x chapter 1 . 4/26/2010
Interesting...
Shenhua Phantom chapter 1 . 4/25/2010
Aww. This is sad, but I really like it.

I like how you wrote about her laughing giddily as she was rolling down the hill, bleeding. The contrast made it creepy... A good creepy.

I also like how you incorporate the military into it and how Grog was developed by them.

Shenhua