Reviews for Realizations
A Kiss in the Dreamhouse chapter 1 . 10/22/2010
Great job on sticking to the Haiku format for the entire poem! And the sentence breaking felt pretty appropriate throughout - congrats for that. I enjoyed the voice, it felt like you were talking directly to me. Loved it, great work!
Vroooommmmmm chapter 1 . 6/16/2010
really enjoyed it...longer than ur other poems but neat and meaningful,carry on...as i said ur poems are gr8...u cud improve though
waitingforwhatever chapter 1 . 6/7/2010
This is amazing, how you managed to make several haikus flow together into one big poem-story. Your emotions are so clear in this one. xD Good job.
William G. Thorne chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
ditto to liking the honesty in this. It gives me a deeper insight into you as a person rather than you as an author.

-William
nickyO chapter 1 . 4/27/2010
You should be proud. :)

Love the honesty in this.